Caught in the mainstream: C&C please

You got caught up in the mainstream
Lost in the crowd
Aren’t you tired of the sound?
Or are you a lost cause.

The people said
I can’t just make that leap
Out the full shade
Into something else
They’re broken

Take my arm
And we’ll jump
Out of the current
We’ll walk into freedom

Say you will
Never look back
Please baby, let it be true
And let it be me and you
Together

I’m getting so weary
Just tired of the sound
Break free
Today, make the change

I might be wrong
But I’m not scared to be alone
I’m in the light
Follow me
We can go

Hold your breath
Make the move
Into the different place
Out the shade
Make it over now

Different place
Shade
Go over,
Now.

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