a rap i wrote "if everyone disappeared"

1rst verse

I come home kiss my wife and lay my daughter down
Jump in the shower and let the water pour down
As i wash off the paint from bein a class clown
Hop out dry all around, Get dressed run upstairs and lay down
I wake up the next mornin and noones ta be found
I round around in a franic, as i began to panic
My heart sinks like the titantic.
Even though i know,
our relationship was rocky and words were gettin low
did she finally up and go?
I start to regret everything bad that i said
as all our fights pop into my head, I made this bed
so i gotta lay in it, i get out my sad record and spin it


Chourus(2x)

If everyone disappeared could you live with yourself
knowin what you did to everyone else
would your conscious eat you alive
or would you be too stubborn ta swallow your pride
and bottle your problems inside


2nd verse

We wasnt suppose to part until death
she was tha air i breathe so i'll hold my breath
I run to my otha babymama's surely they wouldnta left
But her and my son is gone i cant even speak
i haven't seen him for over a week
When he grows up i won't even know him
I shoulda picked up tha phone and called them
Or atleast shown that i care,cause they dont think i did
why was i such a **** , i was so stupid
i had tha priviledge of seein him and i abused it,
because i never used it
As i sit on tha corner smokin a cigarette
my eyes began to sweat and everything i did i regret
If i could go back in time i would change it
Just take every bad thing i did and rearrange it

chourus (2x)

If everyone disappeared could you live with yourself
knowin what you did to everyone else
would your conscious eat you alive
or would you be too stubborn ta swallow your pride
and bottle your problems inside


3rd verse

not one car has drove by, all i can do is cry
I'll just go to my moms she'll get me by.
As i walk my own trail of tears
I reminisce ta back over tha years
of how many time i made mom tear
told her i hated her and didn't wanna be here
She already lived a life so corrupt, dad cheated on her wit sluts,
and i treated her like a mutt, but that woman wouldnt give up
She was so strong, every argument we got into was wrong
I just wish it wouldn't have tooken this long
to try and undo tha seams that i've sewn
It begans to rain washin my tears away
Im walkin up my moms drive way
there's no car outside,i assume they went for a ride
but then i look through the window, itz empty inside
Completely vacant not a single thing,
all i can do is think bout tha regrets and all tha pain
i miss my wife,my daughter,my son,my parents, everything.
I'm all alone sittin here in tha pourin rain

chorous (2x)

If everyone disappeared could you live with yourself
knowin what you did to everyone else
would your conscious eat you alive
or would you be too stubborn ta swallow your pride
and bottle your problems inside

i like it, especially the chorus. i also like the titanic line, thats pretty sick.

thanks its much appreciated i usually freestyle so this is one of the first songs that i wrote except for "when push comes ta shove" it should still be on here but it would be couple pages back