i though of this song while walking my dog yesterrday, i have since changed parts to it and so on. this is my first song i have written and comments would be welcomed

When the summer has come to an end


When the summer has come to an end
You know you have missed your chance
To spend your days
Living your dreams
Once the days are over
Its back to work for...
Another...

You spent your days
Staring into her eyes
But once she went
Your dreams went

You had it good
While it lasted
You took her bowling
You went Spain
But your dreams left...
When she left

You tried to get a new hobby
You tried them all
From swimming to karate
But once she went
We both knew your dreams went

You spent your days
Staring into her eyes
But once she went
Your dreams went

Me and you both know
She was the only one for you
You gave her what she wanted
But...it wasn’t good enough
You weren’t good enough
Move on
Or... you’ll be stuck here for ever

You spent your days
Staring into her eyes
But once she went
Your dreams went