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Next to the bleachers:

The battle wounds are gone
Still the hyperventilation’s
The bandages seem worn on
It’s Becoming impatient

Pounding on my head
The sins are weighing in
The cold is beating
thrashing on my skin.

Driving through my head
Crashing all the other thoughts
Leaving me with this fixation
asking for my medication

Walk through the valley of whispers let it sink in
Walk through the valley of whispers take it all in

Its those red nights with bright blue butterflies
The charcoal pavements brings out the emerald lights
Next to the ash blown tree the only surviving breed
Without my need keeps protecting me

There’s hot water boiling inside
Pouring through my veins
Creeping up behind me
Going to drive me insane

Walk through the valley of whispers let it sink in
Walk through the valley of whispers take it all in

Its those red nights with bright blue butterflies
The charcoal pavements brings out the emerald lights
Next to the ash blown tree the only surviving breed
Without my need keeps protecting me

Protect me, start saving me
The shadow deep, the tainted me
My famous last words
Aren’t spoken to soon

Its those red nights with bright blue butterflies
The charcoal pavements brings out the emerald lights
Next to the ash blown tree the only surviving breed
Without my need keeps protecting me

By Brandon Perry©2009