A Second of Eternity

And then, I woke up.
Surrounded by the greenest leaves.
The sun's ray is in my eyes.
I just couldn't believe it.
The questions appeared by that time,
Like i forgot what to remember.
And so my senses took place.
It was the key to my early thoughts.
It still shivers me.

Confusion hits me.
I'm not supposed to feel so.. awake.
It lasts untill all the moments fade.
By then I remembered,
It's the mind that counts now.
Time for a change that lasts
I've been staring for far to long.
I didn't believe it
but it's the ideal of this illusion to be so real.
i just didn't believe it.
And after all, it was I who saw...
The mind counts forever.

Untill the days came where all would rise
This all felt like a paradise
Where the thinnest air meets a word
That's filled with silence
But as we speak to you
A similar arrives
without any reason.

any critics?