Corectări, vă rog!

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    DeBaires said:

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    Mersi anticipat!

    "Vara trecuta" - Voltaj
    "Last Summer"

    Stropi de mare-n parul tau
    Pearls of the sea in your hair
    Urme de buze pe umarul meu
    Imprints of lips on my shoulder
    Vara trecuta imi spuneai
    Last Summer you used to tell me
    Ca sunt valul ce il asteptai
    That I'm the wave you were waiting for

    Dar apoi nori s-au adunat
    But after, clouds gathered
    Si nu stiu de ce toamna mi te-a furat
    & I don't know why Fall robbed you from me
    Vantul doar sopteste acum
    The wind only whispers now
    Nu mai e nimeni, e singur pe drum
    It's no longer anyone, it's alone on the move

    Si ploua, ploua, ploua peste inima mea
    & it rains, it rains, it rains over my heart
    Un rau de lacrimi, ramane-n urma ta
    A ruver of tears, remains behind you
    Iar noua, noua, noua, noua vieti de-as avea
    & if I would have new/nine* lives
    Le-as da pe-o vara ca cea in care-ai fost a mea
    I would give them for a Summer like the one in which you were mine

    Iar e vara dar ai plecat
    It's Summer again, but you've left
    Nu pot cladi castele din nisip uscat
    I can't build castles out of dry sand
    Soarele nu e, s-a pierdut,
    The sun isn't here, it got lost
    Nu mai iese din mare, ca anul trecut
    it no longers come out from the sea, like last year

    Si ploua, ploua, ploua peste inima mea
    Un rau de lacrimi, ramane-n urma ta
    Iar noua, noua, noua, noua vieti de-as avea
    Le-as da pe-o vara in care-ai fost a mea

    Si ploua, ploua, ploua, peste inima mea
    Un rau de lacrimi, ramane-n urma ta
    Iar noua, noua, noua nu ne va mai canta
    & for us it won't play anymore
    Nici o chitara, pe-o plaja goala, undeva
    Not even a guitar, on the empty beach, somewhere

    *Nu sunt sigur dac-aici noua inseamna "new" sau "9," dar cred ca deasupra inseamna "for us," nu?
    Nu ştiu de ce lupt aşa pentru tine.
    Ti it l'avģe tut ma adess 't as nen gnente.
    Exchange the sunshine for brown eyes & dark skies, replace this dull life with you.
     
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    LOVELYMIRABELA said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by DeBaires View Post
    Mersi anticipat!

    "Vara trecuta" - Voltaj
    "Last Summer"

    Stropi de mare-n parul tau
    Pearls of the sea in your hair
    Urme de buze pe umarul meu
    Imprints of lips on my shoulder
    Vara trecuta imi spuneai
    Last Summer you used to tell me
    Ca sunt valul ce il asteptai
    That I'm the wave you were waiting for

    Dar apoi nori s-au adunat
    But after, clouds gathered
    Si nu stiu de ce toamna mi te-a furat
    & I don't know why Fall robbed you from me
    Vantul doar sopteste acum
    The wind only whispers now
    Nu mai e nimeni, e singur pe drum
    It's no longer anyone, it's alone on the road

    Si ploua, ploua, ploua peste inima mea
    & it rains, it rains, it rains over my heart
    Un rau de lacrimi, ramane-n urma ta
    A river of tears, remains behind you
    Iar noua, noua, noua, noua vieti de-as avea
    Again nine,nine,nine,nine lifes if I would have
    Le-as da pe-o vara ca cea in care-ai fost a mea
    I would give them for a Summer like the one in which you were mine

    Iar e vara dar ai plecat
    It's Summer again, but you've left
    Nu pot cladi castele din nisip uscat
    I can't build castles out of dry sand-dry sand castles
    Soarele nu e, s-a pierdut,
    The sun isn't here, it got lost -or missing
    Nu mai iese din mare, ca anul trecut
    it no longers come out(it no out of the sea) from the sea, like last year

    Si ploua, ploua, ploua peste inima mea
    Un rau de lacrimi, ramane-n urma ta
    Iar noua, noua, noua, noua vieti de-as avea
    Le-as da pe-o vara in care-ai fost a mea

    Si ploua, ploua, ploua, peste inima mea
    Un rau de lacrimi, ramane-n urma ta
    Iar noua, noua, noua nu ne va mai canta
    & for us it won't play anymore-for us it won't sing
    Nici o chitara, pe-o plaja goala, undeva
    Not even a guitar, on the empty beach, somewhere

    *Nu sunt sigur dac-aici noua inseamna "new" sau "9," dar cred ca deasupra inseamna "for us," nu?
    bravo ai facut o treaba excelenta
    Si noua se refera la us ai drepatate

    am cumparat o rochie noua-i buy a new dress.
    Pisica are noua vieti-The cat have nine lifes.
    Acum ai inteles cum sta treaba cu noua?
     
  3. Crisa said:

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    DeBaires great job...Here I made some suggestion for you....

    iar noua, noua, noua nu ne va mai canta
    & for us it won't play anymore

    A cānta la un instrument=to play
    John is playing on his guitar.
    John cāntă la chitară.

    A cānta cu vocea=to sing
    Ana sings this song so beautiful.
    Ana cāntă acest cāntec atāt de frumos.

    I hope that I've made me understood....I'm not that good when it comes to teaching....
    Last edited by Crisa; 05-26-2009 at 04:38 AM.
     
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    DeBaires said:

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    Thank you very much to the both of you!!!

    Si da, am inteles totul
    Nu ştiu de ce lupt aşa pentru tine.
    Ti it l'avģe tut ma adess 't as nen gnente.
    Exchange the sunshine for brown eyes & dark skies, replace this dull life with you.
     
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    LOVELYMIRABELA said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by DeBaires View Post
    Thank you very much to the both of you!!!

    Si da, am inteles totul
    You welcome anytime tk care