Song Snippetts: Comments? I'll comment back :D

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  1. doolzi said:

    Smile Song Snippetts: Comments? I'll comment back :D

    I'm pretty ready for the rains to fade
    And for the sun to shine once more
    It is too hard to cry and moan
    Once we've stepped outside the door
    Today is the day
    We must get up and say
    We'll stand for what we believe in
    No matter who or what gets in our way

    ^^
    Chorus for a song I'm working on, seems like it doesnt fit a beat until you hear it with the rhythm I've got going for it.

    So people of my country
    People of my world
    I ask you to remember
    My story that's unfurled
    That we each every human
    Belong upon this earth
    And with time and acceptance
    We'll discover all their worth
    Overcoming every protest
    Take it in our stride
    We can change future history
    Each by each others side

    ^^
    A section of a peace prize poem I was thinking of converting to a song? Do you think it'd work?

    Thanks for your feedback-I'll return comments
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