Breaking Point.....Plz comment

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  1. nyvega002 said:

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    Breaking Point

    Everything you’ve said to me, all the lies
    You’ve went and broken all the ties
    All the things that kept me sane
    And held me from tearing you apart

    Now I’m starting to hear more and more
    My patience has been torn
    I’m tired of holding back now
    My anger wants to be let out

    I’ve reached my breaking point
    I have lost all control
    I’m demolishing these walls
    They can no longer hold
    The hate, regret
    The pain and death
    The love, insults
    The fights and threats
    I’ve reached my breaking point
    I have lost all control

    If you think you’re hiding anything
    I’ll be the first to tell you you’re wrong
    Don’t know why they tell me everything
    But what I hear is pissing me off

    You can continue talking and you can run
    But never begin to think that you’ve won
    Theses negative voices running through my head
    Trust me my friend, they will be put to an end

    You’ve pushed me so far
    Now it’s only getting harder
    You make me feel like ****
    Why do I even care to bother

    I’ve reached my breaking point
    I have lost all control
    I’m demolishing these walls
    They can no longer hold
    The hate, regret
    The pain and death
    The love, insults
    The fights and threats
    I’ve reached my breaking point
    I have lost all control

    Everything you’ve said to me, all the lies
    You’ve went and broken all the ties
    All the things that kept me sane
    And held me from tearing you apart

    I’ve reached my breaking point
    I have lost all control
    I’m demolishing these walls
    I’ve lost all control
     
  2. miketheman4 said:

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    this is deep. its got zest. i give it a thumbs up, good job