hi there,

im just trying to get some feedback for the lyrics ive written down. unfortunately english is not my first language, but im getting better every time i complete a lyric. so i hope someone can help me! thank you & enjoy.

Faithful Fly On My Head


faithful fly on my head.
Impersonation of my beliefs.
The kids are screamin'
because of burning family trees.
square by square.
The neverending chasing thrill.
queens die of boredom
after all the kings were killed.

now the moon shines bright.
the tides are running low.
The last chapter is written;
“we reap what we`ve sowed”.

Faithful fly on my head.
Nothing disappears.
from ashes to dust
from vengeance to tears.
Nothing left but broken porcelain
and a history of doom.
My aging flesh
covered by mushrooms.

now the moon shines bright.
the tides are running low.
The last chapter is written;
“we reap what we`ve sowed”.

Faithful fly on my head.
Impersonation of my beliefs.
The fat man's way, as we see
was a dead end street.
Dying, unimpressed,
of the love I have strewn,
of the bird in my hand
and God, - God in my womb.


greetings,

and up again!