First Song - Need Feedback

Hey guys, this is my first attempt at writing. I hope you like it. ALL criticism is welcomed, whether it be positive or negative. This was written for more of an Acoustic type of genre. And I'm thinking about adding another verse or two, let me know what you think. Enjoy.

Title: Unititled
Artist: Clay

I admire your walk
Amazed when you talk
Everything you say
Takes my breath away
All the things you do
When you don't mean to
It drives me all the way back to you

[Chorus]
I've come so far
It's been so hard
Not being able to walk with you
Not being able to talk to you ---> (Kind of like an echo)
Not being able to see you smile
Its been such a long while
Since I've been happy at all..

You have no idea
How much you cross my mind
Just thinking about you
Gives me a feeling inside
I can't explain it
How it makes me feel
It kinda makes me think
That this might be real..

[Chorus]

The light in your eyes
Is where the truth lies
You try to hide the pain
But you can't help but cry..
You sit and wonder why
Everyone says goodbye
Why the world is so unfair
And that you want to die..

But don't despair
There's someone there
Someone to love you
And to take care
Of all the things
That trouble you
To throw away the past
And see the world anew..

[Chorus]

I like it a lot. The sentiments in it are nice, and it flows nicely. I don't think you need another verse.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. And you really don't think I should add another verse? Do you think maybe I should change up the very last [Chorus] part? I dunno, the only problem I have with it is just the ending. It doesn't seem that "right" to me.

Well, I think closing on the last verse, maybe with "I've come so far" as an exit refrain would work better than closing with the chorus. Maybe cut the last chorus or move it to before the last verse?

Hmm, that's actually not a bad idea. I like it. You, my friend, are brilliant.