IN ANOTHER ZONE REMIX(commment plz??)

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much love
-sdbb-


(note: if you dnt like this,then let me no what i did wrong so i can make it better,,i really like having my fans tell me my mistakes)(also i really didnt take any time at all and the versues are pretty much freestyles cuz they were off the top of my head)

chorus
im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone//money dont make me//hoes cant break me//yall ni99as haten me//cuz yall cant take me//im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone//*****s dnt like that,,hoes dnt like that//puttem on the right track//now they comin right back//im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone

v1
i came from the bottom of the bottom with these songs//now im at the top chillen wit *****s like sean pual//i get dat cash fast//i aint gettin signed till i see a million cash//*****s haten and im never strapped//pull a 9 on me and ima take dat//trienna swagger jack//whats up with that//ima laughin at you haters//the farther i make it dah more yall become faker//i aint gone stop till i say so//and you hoes cant break me and you already no//i do dis netime and neday//you say i cant rap?? but i do it neways//i hustle but cant ball//so i just take out a stack and throw it at yall//but thats another situation for another song//you *****s stuck on wack while im in another zone


chorus
money dont make me//hoes cant break me//yall ni99as haten me//cuz yall cant take me//im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone//ni99as dnt like that,,hoes dnt like that//puttem on the right track//now they comin right back//im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone

v2
ni99as hate me at the top cuz im gettin all dis attention//they be on the stage and hear my name gettin mentiond//sendin nikkas to try and make my tracks stop//but when they come to my house ery1 of dem be gettin dropped//i say f*ck fame its all about cash//its all about dat paper and gettin it fast//i dnt rap about hoes or cars//i rap about money and how i got so far//nikkas and hoes dnt like dat//but maken step right back//get respect from all c'ville cuz i keep it so hood//doin sh*t other nikkas never would//bout to drop and album M.O.B//its gunna have you nikkas up all night not bein able to sleep//but thats another situation for another song//yall ni99as stuck on wack while im in another zone

chorus:
money dont make me//hoes cant break me//yall ni99as haten me//cuz yall cant take me//im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone//*****s dnt like that,,hoes dnt like that//puttem on the right track//now they comin right back//im in another zone//im in another zone//im in another zone


v3
dese nikkas still trienna stop me man//hundred rounds gone make these nikkas do the chopper dance//im in an other zone//doin my thing gettin outa controll/doin my thing with out my bling//playn dat trapt **** aint no need to sing//i aint no trapt ****//im just ****in with you nikkas playin around with this rap shiit//that money be satisfyin to you get popped for dat//hundred more rounds and ima take dat//you say you frum dah hoodbut dat aint true//trienna be feminem but that aint chu//nikkas listen to dis cuz we aint beefin// my pockets gettin fat but yall still aint eatin//but thats another situation for another song//you nikkas stuck on wack while im in another zone