Lyrics I wrote

Here are some lyrics I wrote.Please comment them and be honest.Thanks!

Narcissi

(Serve the servants)
Teenage sex and pain as well
Now I’m boarded alone
I tried hard to be with you
But instead I broke my heart
And it aches a lot when I
Laugh but no one feels it
Self-assured and wicked
Blinded they just judge

Listen mum and dad oh no
Narcissi speak in me
I won’t do it

Beating desert is inside
The burn hurts really bad
If you travel through it will you find an oasis
Or just some dry lakes and smother in the fog
Rain is gone and blazing sun is here
Nothing I could do

Listen mum and dad oh no
Narcissi speak in me
I won’t do it

No tears left to cry
Just the resound of a bleeding heart
Eyes have lost their sight
And they can’t even close
So sad I can’t cry
So tired I can’t sleep
Going where the lilies float
In the calm white sea
I will be as one




(Polly)
Locked inside a cage
It’s inside your own head
Spring is here again
But the eyes have lost their sight

Fly above
Purple clouds
Someone clips
Your small wings
You fall
down and die
Before you ‘ve lived
Realize
just what you’ve missed
Go through a tube
Let me show you
some light
Cut yourself
You don’t bleed
No pain is there left
Just a corpse

You need to love again
But you can hardly breathe
You get lost inside your mind
It’s too mazy to pull you back

Fly above
Purple clouds
Someone clips
Your small wings
You fall
down And die
Before you ‘ve lived
Realize
just what you’ve missed
Go through a tube
Let me show you
some light
Cut yourself
You don’t bleed
No pain is there left
Just a corpse


You don’t
Don’t even care if you‘ll live
You say you’re just a ghost
There’s no point for going on
Amazes me how dead you are

Fly above
The purple clouds
Someone clips
Your small wings
You fall down and die
Before you ‘ve lived
Realize
just what you’ve missed
Go through a tube
Let me show you
some light
Cut yourself
You don’t bleed
No pain is there left
Just a corpse


Lucy in the sky with diamonds(a.k.a. Anorexic)

(Sappy)
Corroded by the pain
Another day is there to live
Dwell on the drops of rain
Try to make it out
What is going on with you
Given medication
‘till your stomach is covered
With big black holes

Now
You’re put in a jar
put in a jar and watched in there
They fake a life
Oh

Her blood will just drip out
Is she a saint or used
At least and fooled
Wasted experimental
Beast and anorexic
You’ll remain unknown
Think you’ll just linger on
Surrounded by people

Now
You’re put in a jar
put in a jar and watched in there
They fake a life
Oh
Now
You’re put in a jar
put in a jar and watched in there
They fake a life
Oh

You’ve become a different one
Blear eyes and foggy mind
Your story is done
Driven out of your mind
You can feel
But feel only pain
Find your savior
In the strawberry fields



P.S.Sorry for the lenght.The songs in the brackets under the headline are in the same rythm as my lyrics are supposed to be.My vocabulary isn't very varied but I'm not English and I'm studying the language now.And the third song doesn't have a headline.

Why would you come on here and post lyrics by one of the biggest bands of the last 20 years and claim them as your own.

That is just sad.

Very sad.

Please never post on here again.

Those are not Nirvana's lyrics.I put in the brackets the names of the song which I listened to while writing the lyrics.Those lyrics could be performed in the rythm that is the song in the brackets.I don't have a musical instrument so I can't do my own rythm righ now.I'd love to but....I'm far away from the thought that my lyrics are as good as Nirvana's.That's just RIDICULOUS because Nirvana are really one of the best bands ever and are UNIQUE.You can find on the Internet Nirvana' lyrics and see that those are not the same.And the names are diffrent,too.Even the meaning is different and how could you think that I will post Nirvana lyrics and claim they are mine.That will be the most foolish thind ever.

There are deifinitely a number of parts of the first song which are directly lifted from nirvana.

Ok,I agree with you.But the meaning is different.I'll delete the first one.What do you think of the others?

we the suduced
nahh man
you wack dawg

did you read sappy??
his version
how in the f*ck can you say sumn that wack,,is nirvanas??