A minor tragedy, this one...

It's meant to be a low-tempo ballad all about sorrow and desperation:

I need freedom from my mind
Please come to me with relief
Come inside and bring the sky
Crawl right on in and unleash
A heart and soul gone all awry
Please come give me release

Come into me and wander through
See what it is that you can see
Come tell me what I can do
To be a little less like me

I can't see solace in this world
I look out gagged and bound
My mind's a gaol for my soul
My liberty as yet unfound
I really want you to come in
And find out my fatal flaw
Come into my mind please
And open wide all the doors

Come into me and wander through
See what it is that you can see
Come tell me what I can do
To be a little less like me

Come into me and wander through
See what it is that you can see
Come tell me what I can do
To be a little less like me

Please come into me
Please come rescue me
Please
Please