i wana be your life (comment plz)

Me and a few mates just started a band lol

so this is mine and my friends first attempt at writing lyrics together lol.

She was fresh just turned sweet 16
she caught the glance of my eyesight
and i began to believe
id fall in love with her

id trust she'd never leave for another
ever since i saw her alone there

my heart chased boom
as she strayed from the corner of the room
and placed her hand in mine
then i could see id fall in love with her

id trust she'd never leave for another
ever since i saw her alone there

slowly fell deeper through the night
wana never let go hold on tight
and before the night was done i fell in love with her

id trust she'd never leave for another
ever since i saw her alone there

the base of the lyrics is a one night stand lol. thanks for the reply by the way mate.

Originally Posted by mean1010

Thank you very much for the lesson. I knew that I can do this in better way.
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what mate sorry im confused lol?