Reason for Living (Comment Please!)

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  1. detigers28 said:

    Red face Reason for Living (Comment Please!)

    You brighten my day when its dark and gloomy,
    Just the thought of you sends the sunshine through me
    I got more luxury's then an average man should
    But I'd give them all away cause with you, I'm good

    I'd do any and everything to make you smile,
    Climb the biggest mountain or walk a thousand miles
    All I ever wanted was to make you my queen
    And to me your worth the wait, all eight-teen

    I want you now more then ever
    And my feelings will never change, there forever
    Not a girl on earth could alter the way I feel
    Nothing counterfit here baby, my love is foreal
    Now I'm Praying you'll return the love I'm giving,
    I wanna make you my reason for living
    Last edited by detigers28; 09-04-2009 at 03:14 PM.
     
  2. ylonita said:

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    Pretty nice but is this a poem or a lyric? If not then you should use the first 4 sentences as verse 1, and the other 4 sentences as verse 2.. and the 6 sentences as a chorus after each verse.. but really nice done!