My First Freestyle

see my namme is lil dee and *****s know i got that heat
i see em on the street and i bust em in they teeth
i put em 6 feet deep i hit em with this ouzi they go get they lil 9
i hit em wit dis gat then i get back on my grind
i stay havin money these *****s watin my time im a ***** wit the trigga
ill bust it in yo face ***** if you dont belive me then see whats below my waist



THE FIRST FREESTYLE I
EVER DID

It's in the wrong forum and to be honest you swear (or look like you swear) too much in the rap to make any sort of intelligence there...


Instead of acting much older and tougher than I believe you are, listen to acts like Public Enemy or NWA or Run DMC, form proper sentences and paint a picture with your words.