this is my song and i hope u like it.its called "black roses"

you held my hand u led the way,u told me everythin will be ok.


cho

my heart is in lack all my roses turned to black.
black roses,black roses,black roses,black roses.


verse

u always told me we were perfect together,now thats never.
u made me feel so nice in side,but now i know ur a lie.


cho>>


bridge


dont pretend like i dont know, u try to make it seem so low, but its obvious to me.u gave me chills up and dwn my spine,but all i do now is go and hide.


cho>>2


please be honest on what u think.and give me sugestions to please.i can take it!!!!!!

any ideas