rewrite, better or worse?? THX

Thread: rewrite, better or worse?? THX

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  1. Finally1one said:

    Default rewrite, better or worse?? THX

    Take this ring

    You had so much love for me, in the beginning
    You used to tell me I was your every thing
    Just seeing my face or hearing my name,
    Made you feel our love inside, when you gave me this ring.
    Then as time went on, your feelings changed
    And with that brought a lot of pain
    Your thoughts of me became just every day
    Hello, goodbye, see you later today….

    Take the house, take the car, take this ring
    I don’t want it, you can have everything.
    You can try to do or say anything
    But I have nothing left to give anymore
    No love, no care, I’m done, I’m walking out that door

    It’s too much; the name calling, yelling and arguing.
    It took a piece of our relationship each time it happened
    We made up, we apologized, then it happened again
    Little by little, tearing us apart from within
    I never imagined this was how it would end
    Losing my soul-mate, my life long friend

    Take the house, take the car, take this ring
    I don’t want it, you can have everything.
    You can try to do or say anything
    But I have nothing left to give anymore
    No love, no care, I’m done, I’m walking out that door

    No apologies this time, no weekend in Toronto
    Or another trip to Mexico
    We were only fooling ourselves that things were good again
    Every time we got back home the reality set back in
    Slowly our love fading away and our relationship deteriorating

    Take the house, take the car, take this ring
    I don’t want it, you can have everything.
    You can try to do or say anything
    But I have nothing left to give anymore
    No love, no care, I’m done, I’m walking out that door
     

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