What do you all think, honestly?

Going Slow

What a beautiful day
So let’s set astray
All the past from yesterday

Take it slow
Stop to see the paths
And think before I choose
Let’s make this day glow

No more depression
No more obsession
Let’s set myself straight
Take it slow

Tired of falling
All of the failing
It takes such a toll
Let’s bury this hole
Take it slow

Think about the future
Where will I be later on down the road?
What will become of this choice?
Let’s set these priorities straight
Just going to take it slow

Because I know I will get there eventually
Eventually
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A few parts in there can be changed, I just don't know what to change them to. If you are thinking "why is it so short", then it is because I am a slow singer.

I like it, and I don't think it's short, I have the opposite problem! The message get across fine too.