ok i know im new but why does everyone get more views. a comment would be nice to :)

i study quantum physics / and question
realistics / everything thats twisted / could be
the perfect norm what is it? / hyroglyphics
signaling perfect scriptures / study up get
knowledge you dont have to be gifted / the
listeners get lifted, and continue to kick it /
you can make the beat bang with words that
still get wicked / teach the beat the bang and
how to hang with wisdom / like any
knowledgable time tested system /

in the end you will choose your own fate / dont try
to stalemate or even pretend to be late / every choice
you make every second you lose / is like your voices
way to silently choose / we got rules and many tools /
brainstorm for reform / let me take you to a place way
outta your norm / the pursuit of knowledge is exactly
what im reppin / give me a second gotta load up this deadly
weapon /

i got more thoughts just tired right now thanks to anyone who reads and especially anyone who can give some feedback. ive posted alot over the past few days ive joined here with few views and no responses. not sure why since some people get alot of both anyway if anyone could explain that or just comment in general great. ill be reading and commenting on others as much as i can. thx.

Your work is decent. It's a little choppy but good. Keep it up.

thx MZ appreciate it. did you read all the stuff i posted? most is in one post i jotted like 3 or 4 verses. the reason I ask is what do you mean by choppy, im assuming you mean theres sections that dont time right and flow properly together. thats for sure a tuff part with no beat, ive got someone who wants to lay down my vocals and has some nice beats made with fruity loops. should be interesting. all for fun im still learning so. peace.