Burning Out

Hey, some of you may recognize the Chours from one of my other songs, but I thought it fits better in this song:

Fighting, isn't my friend
I am, good to pretend
Burning, out tonight
Help me, to ignite

Grass, is greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You're, the one
That makes me feel
Feels, so good
It can't be real
Oh, no...

At night, dream of the day
My life's, here on display
Burning, out tonight
Help me, to ignite

Grass, is greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You're the one
That makes me feel
Feels so good
It can't be real
No, no, no, no no.

Final, silence of heart
My faith, slowly departs
Burning, out tonight
Help me, to ignite

Grass, is greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You're, the one that
Makes me feel
Feels so good
It can't be real
Oh, no...

Come on ? please give me some hint about if its good or bad ?

I do not get the peoint of the song? Plus you say the same thing over and over. try and ryme a little more to. but it has good flow.

It is very basic, but rolls nicely