Love song i wrote about a girl i like. Please comment.

Love Rhyme



Emily, you know I want you girl,
You are my world,
I know I told people I like you,
And I wish I never had,
And I know it makes you mad,
And it makes me sad,
Cuz I really do like you
It would be just us two.
I know that I love you,
No matter what you do,
No matter what you say,
Ill be here for you,
No matter what day,
And by the way,
The love for you,
That’s in my heart will stay

CHORUS
Emily, just be with me
Because im the guy for you,
Just give me a chance,
It will be true romance
Just let me show you what I can do,
And I promise that it all will be true.

I can do this rhyme all the time,
To get you to just be mine,
An hopefully it makes you,
Fall in love with me because,
When I rhyme I sing about,
True feelings and I swear that
My heart is going to jump out
And hit the ceiling, and I promise,
That my heart is trying to help me see,
That you’re the only one for me.

CHORUS
Emily, just be with me
Because im the guy for you,
Just give me a chance,
It will be true romance
Just let me show you what I can do,
And I promise that it all will be true.

One day I wish it was just me and you,
And I hope you feel the same way to,
We could start are own family tree,
To come to think about it,
You never even said you like me,

It seems to me that you do like me,
But please don’t lead me on,
That would be really wrong,
Please don’t break my heart,
I don’t want us to ever be apart.

If you do like me,
Please let me know,
I would feel so special,
You would make me glow,
But the best thing for me to do,
Is take it slow,
But I just want you to know,
I love you

CHORUS
Emily, just be with me
Because im the guy for you,
Just give me a chance,
It will be true romance
Just let me show you what I can do,
And I promise that it all will be true.

you are starting to get really, good. my favorite part is when you start the second verse. this girl is really lucky.....bye have a good day.(:

This girl ended up not wanting to be with me. but i still do have feelings for her. But thank you so much for commenting. I love it when people comment and say good things.

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Why do people say "bump/"......What does it mean?Oh yeah,i love your song.If i would have read this i would have went out with you..................

haha? you don't even know me? how old are you? But people say bump so that people will see the thread they made.

I meant if i knew you,and i was the girl that you liked i would have went out with you.

I am 18

I like the rhymes... Nice and deep, I also like "Emily, just be with me" because "ily" and "me" rhyme together. Nicee...

Thank you!

Hi,this is really good.I like the way you write.

Thanks

aaww what a cute song
im sure the Emily you wrote it for would love it, at least this Emily does

thank you emily.

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