Yet another song.

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    Steve0 said:

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    Emily


    Ok, I know I may mess up,
    But everybody messes up,
    and anyone can mess up,
    just let me tell you what’s up.

    I was so loved up,
    I didn’t see I’d messed up,
    Until it was too late and now,
    I’m tryna pick my heart up,

    You gotta believe me,
    When I say that I liked you ,
    When I say that I like you,
    When I say that I trust you,

    And if it’s too late forever,
    For a me and you,
    Then know when it was us two,
    I was so in love with you,

    And I hope the next man,
    Knows just how to treat you,
    To get you smiling and feeling,
    The way that I do,

    Your so so special,
    In every single way,
    You’ve got me so insane,
    Almost every single day,

    Your on my mind 24/7,
    An Eternal Mistake,
    And In my mind from,
    The moment I awake,

    Until the time I go to sleep,
    Starts the very next day,
    You’re the stuff of my dreams,
    You’re my, night time queen,

    You’re my early morning princess,
    My mid day wishes,
    My late night kisses,
    My reason, to exist,

    And if you give me, one wish,
    It would be to be with you,
    But I see the truth,
    It’ll never be me and you,

    And I wish I could,
    Turn back time,
    But I’m no superhero,
    You are mine,

    I pray to god,
    I ask why god? Why?
    But it’s not his fault, It’s all on I,
    Know I did so many things,

    To deserve this ending,
    But I know with one more chance,
    I’d make a happy ending, spending,
    The rest of my life with you girl,

    Cause you are my world,
    And every time I see you now,
    Yeah it just hurts,
    But I’d never trade in,
    The time I spent with you,

    And if I got the chance,
    Yeah there’d be a part 2,
    So this is your song,
    Put it on, sing a long
    Just be with me,
    EMILY
  2. SarahMostul said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve0 View Post
    And if I got the chance,
    Yeah there’d be a part 2,
    So this is your song,
    Put it on, sing a long
    Just be with me,
    EMILY
    I especially liked this verse
    So cute!
    You're song about taylor swift is a little scary but I like your songs
  3. max93722 said:

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    pretty good but you use to many of the same words to rhyme
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    That taylor swift song was just a dent in my lyric writings. i do not know why i posted it. It was a song i made in school just to make my guy friiends laugh. I should have not posted it.
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