Contradiction (first post on site, first song ever wrtten)

Yes you were such a beautiful girl
Such a treasure yet so unknown
They mocked you as they blackened your path
Making you sob all alone


I just stood there and watched this go
Not helping you in your time of need
Not wanting to tarnish my reputation
As I silently butchered my creed


Oh what happened to the girl that I used to know?
did the pressure just too strongly bind?
did the bitter remarks finally sink in too deeply?
did the loneliness deprave your mind?


It seems I now look at you from afar
True smiles have come to a halt
Deep inside my mind it drives me insane
How some of this may be my fault


Your wardrobe appears to now have changed
No longer at the beat of your own drum
The bile you willingly force out of yourself
As corrosive as your soul has become


Oh what happened to the girl that I used to know?
did the pressure just too strongly bind?
did the bitter remarks finally sink in too deeply?
did the loneliness deprave your mind?


There is no point in lying is there?
Your no longer the sweet girl I'd known
With your new found way to plague all innocence
Even though they're the same seeds you've sown


Your mind is hardly used anymore
It's no longer needed to get what you want
You'll just walk through the dark halls your now set on
Finding other beautiful girls to haunt


Oh what happened to the girl that I used to know
did the pressure just too strongly bind
did the bitter remarks finally sink in too deeply
did the loneliness deprave your mind?
did the loneliness deprave your mind?


Please tell me what you think or if you dislike something.

I indeed like this, really dark and deep. I like it!