"Dysutopia" Please Comment!

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  1. Essen said:

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    I've written these lyrics for my band. This will be put in a sort of dark, Katatonia-ish setting.
    Please tell me what you think! This forum is way too quiet!


    Cracks within
    the deep scaring
    A pressure on the soul
    When it's
    had enough
    of you

    A repeating cycle
    of your past mistakes
    Put your self in my place
    You'd burn it all down

    Cracks within
    the deep scaring
    A pressure on the soul
    And you fear
    The human shell
    You know what's inside

    A repeating cycle
    of your past mistakes
    Put your self in my place
    You'd burn it all down x2

    lay it down to your race
    you could have walked away

    A repeating cycle
    of your past mistakes
    Put your self in my place
    You'd burn it all down
     

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