Goin' Where The Sun Shines (please comment and/or rate)

Photographs, photographs
piled up on the bedroom floor
topped with mountains of memories, memories
that i'm burning, i'm burning up
sedatives, sedatives
keep me numb to every word spoken in this place
and these melodies, melodies
that i'm tuning, im tuning out

This is the moment where i pack my bags
and let these four wheels carry me 'til i lose track of time
got nothing on my mind
ain't got nothing on the line
but i'm going where the sun shines, goin where the sun shines
and everything just turns into gold
with every beam of light that hits the hearts that we hold
ain't nothing on my mind
ain't got nothing on the line
but i'm going where the sun shines..yeahhh

dissonance, dissonance
my head says no but my heart won't stop
so i got to ride away, ride away
from these feelings, these feelings
peddlin', peddlin'
just like kevin federline i'm falling on spears
they been peircing my heart and it's hard to be sure
if i'm learning, i'm learning

This is the moment where i pack my bags
and let these four wheels carry me 'til i lose track of time
got nothing on my mind
ain't got nothing on the line
but i'm going where the sun shines, goin where the sun shines
and everything just turns into gold
with every beam of light that hits the hearts that we hold
ain't nothing on my mind
ain't got nothing on the line
but i'm going where the sun shines..yeahhh

*break*

i packed my bags i'm headin out
gonna hit this road and tear it up
with the wind in my hair destination unknown
i packed my bags i'm headin out
gonna hit this road and tear it up
with the wind in my hair destination unknown

This is the moment where i pack my bags
and let these four wheels carry me 'til i lose track of time
got nothing on my mind
ain't got nothing on the line
but i'm going where the sun shines, goin where the sun shines
and everything just turns into gold
with every beam of light that hits the hearts that we hold
ain't nothing on my mind
ain't got nothing on the line
but i'm going where the sun shines..yeahhh

copyright 2010 acoustik musik ltd. (song has been recorded with music and vocals..not yet available for public to hear yet. will be released with upcoming album)

hey does anyone like this? please gimme a comment or 2

lol well thanks for the comment and glad you like. i've read some of your stuff and youre pretty good.

I dig the repitition. Made me think of Imogen Heaps music.
Really good

again thank you springy i left a comment with the link to my music but i will send it to you so you can hear some of my stuff