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niceee

he write a short lyric
so he need
a short comment lmao

Originally Posted by 2012

shooting in the dark but what about title "Life's Adrenaline" haha just cause liveing feels great and exciting ///and simos you do know that one word posting or basicly what most of your post are, is considerd spam, instead of just "nice" say that + some feedback or something. Just helping you out from your posts getting deleted again.

who are you to tell mr.s what to do? you don't run these forums. your no moderator.

but this song is too short and does not rhyme.

steve i can't thank you enough
but be easy

let him say what ever he likes



and the lyric is nice so far

Originally Posted by Steve0

who are you to tell mr.s what to do? you don't run these forums. your no moderator.

but this song is too short and does not rhyme.

Songs don't always have to rhyme..just saying. They don't have to blatantly rhyme, likes yours do, it could just be words that sound similar. Sometimes songs flow better when the end of lines don't rhyme. Otherwise its just painful and over the top, like some of your songs. Just sayin.