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Oh i can see the loneliness in your eyes
i can feel the emptiness in your heart
oh i see you changing
and i can feel the magic fading away

I don't know if its real
but i just cant stand it
oh i will let you go
i will set you free

But just know this
i will be waiting for you
cause i know you will come back to me
cause its not over

Oh i will wipe your tears when you cry
carry you when you fall
i will be the light to vanish your fears
i will always be there to hold your hand
cause your the only one
oh the only one
the only one

Oh my heart breaks
as each dawn breaks without you
but i keep my spirits up high
cause i know you will come back
cause its not over
oh its not over

I wont surrender because
as long as i remember it will never end
Just stop resisting
let yourself go
and you will find
what your looking for

Oh you will know what your heart desires
and you will come back
cause your the only one
oh the only one

Originally Posted by donkey5557

Oh i can see the loneliness in your eyes
i can feel the emptiness in your heart
oh i see you changing
and i can feel the magic fading away

I don't know if its real
but i just cant stand it
oh i will let you go
i will set you free

But just know this
i will be waiting for you
cause i know you will come back to me
cause its not over

Oh i will wipe your tears when you cry
carry you when you fall
i will be the light to vanish your fears
i will always be there to hold your hand
cause your the only one
oh the only one
the only one.

this is very nice for a beginning, add to it/

beautiful keep it up!