Rising up from the flames
Who the hell am I to blame?
Silence is upon your tongue
Never knowing what is said and done

You believe it is all your shame
Don't Believe you can make me tame

In this burning sea of binding light
Break these chains that hold me tight
Bleeding deep inside my skin
Breaking free to live again


Any suggestions would also be appreciated, our band is influenced by Guns N' Roses, Metallica, AC/DC, Rush, Iron Maiden, etc.

Wow, this just drives it home! Really nice, the lyrics are so smooth that it's almost pure thought to read this.

I agree with TEVOLI, this flows really well. All I can say is add some more and finish it up, cuz I think you're really onto something here. Just from what I read, may I suggest entitling it "Flaming Freedom"?