New "Funny" song called Devils Metal ;)

Hi people.

This is my first attempt on a kind of funny song. Please dont critizise it for not being funny, bacause the lyrics itself is not that funny, it's more the melody,and the way of singing it, and performing the song. Anyways hope for some feedback

It started, long ago
When God, let him go

He was pissed, at the man
So he formed, a rocking band

Metal!

It is mean, it ain't clean
It is rock supreme
It has flaws, but no laws
It don't need your applause

Metal!

The Metal, will not fall
The Metal, speaks to all

It's true, but not defined
It's believes, you can't decline

Metal!

It is mean, it ain't clean
It is rock supreme
It has flaws, but no laws
It don't need your applause

Metal!
Metal!
Metal!

Metal!

Come on, just a little feedback?