A crazy need of change is screaming
It’s slowly growing on the inside
It feels like I'm just dreaming
I can't explain it all to you tonight...
“It’s not right!” I yell, but you don’t have to be fair
No matter what I say you’re still gonna dare
But I can't understand this concept of "me and you"
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A chorus I just wrote, can anyone help me with the verses?
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It's hard to suggest verses without knowing much about the song. It sounds like a relationship song though so...
If you think of the chorus as a 'summing up' of how you are feeling, then the verses could be events or things that have been said that make you feel this way.
A good example of this is one of Avril Lavignes first singles 'complicated'.
The chorus is a big shout moaning about things getting complicated whereas the verses are all examples of how things are getting that way.
Then later on you can have a bridge which might reveal something else.
For example,
There might be a big change coming but you're going to try stick it out
or
You're about to give up
or
Recognition that you're slowly understanding the concept of me and you - you can also add sarcasm here
Anyway hope that helps.
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Thank you for your help, I will try to finish the song later
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If you can tell us some more about what the situation your writing about is, I'll write some verses.