Teardrops in a story

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  1. carina<3 said:

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    Love doesn't make exceptions
    Doesn't skip anyone
    Not even me
    Even though I would've liked it

    -Chorus-
    But now it's over
    Teardrops overwhelmed this story
    Teardrops in a story
    The feelings were erased

    It's always like that
    Roads break apart
    Like our roads
    Now I'm all alone

    -Chorus-
    But now it's over
    Teardrops overwhelmed this story
    Teardrops in a story
    The feelings were erased

    I've forgotten you in time
    Just like I wanted to
    I said goodbye to the memories
    It's all gone

    -Chorus-
    But now it's over
    Teardrops overwhelmed this story
    Teardrops in a story
    The feelings were erased

    The scars won't be the same
    If roads will meet again
    But you are gone forever
    And so is the love

    -Chorus-
    Cause now it's over
    Teardrops overwhelmed this story
    Teardrops in a story
    The feelings were erased
     
  2. Lil'ash Bbz said:

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    cool write verses with a meaning and ones people can relate to. do u ever get that feeling when a song reminds you of yourself, thats the feeling you should be goin for, but its awesome the chorus! good work. oh make sure u post it 2 me when you have the verses done. I wana read it!
    Lil'ash Bbz <3
     
  3. Toasted Wonderbread said:

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    Expand it a little more and it would be great. I myself would tweak the chorus a little but but that's just my opinion.
     
  4. sophieB said:

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    Hi, its a well written song, but maybe extend it a bit longer, to make it more meaning full and you can feel the emotion in your words, keep up the good work