Homage

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  1. Staypuft said:

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    Perceiving beyond the farthest reaches of mankind,
    We are the great divide,
    A revolving door fused by beautiful minds,
    The sirens of our culture will never die

    We will rise from the ashes of our depths,
    Annihilate all of their expectations,
    Stand tall and march for our declaration,
    Call out the names and wake every demon,
    Hate, malice, revenge,
    Nailed, dead, risen,
    We are the unknown,
    We are the unheard

    For every black cloud has a silver lining,
    For every night comes forth a blackening,
    I will crack the sky,
    I will look past the horizons

    Our daggers are drawn,
    This is the end of all things to come,
    As we await the oncoming storm,
    Unmarked silhouettes, all hope is gone
    Lyricist/Bassist

    Influences: The Acacia Strain, Misery Signals, Stick To Your Guns, The Black Dahlia Murder, All Shall Perish, and tons more
     
  2. RachelMarie said:

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    I like this. A lot. It's really catchy in a sort of dark, desolating way. The only thing I would say it could use is some sort of chorus. If you don't want to go with a traditional chorus, a mere repition would sound good in the lyrics. To really pound out an idea in the listener's head. Keep up the good work! Look forward to reading more.