work in progress

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  1. 7shape7shifter7 said:

    Default work in progress

    I realize this is kinda short but I wanted to get some feedback on these lyrics. Thank you for reading. If it seems kinda choppy it's because it's set to an arrangement with an odd time signature. No title as of yet.

    A shallow spot to lay my head
    in a sea of empty promises

    low

    shaking every breath I take
    a convoluted sense of shame

    can't I shake this low

    can't I fight this pain

    can't I wake up now

    will I live again

    no

    Hang my head another day
    just a slave to my mistakes

    low

    but I got some things to do
    guess I'll just be passing through
     

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