came up with in the shower just now

dead, and blind
now you start to cry
and i am forced to say its alright

now you turn, to me
but i walk away
because the way you stare
it burns.

you couldve stayed
then you wouldve been saved
but you ran away
so your mind starts to fray

you told me " i wanna sit on the edge"
i told you "you'd just end up screaming my name"
but when you fell
you shouted"now your the one screaming my name"

It seems a little typical. The whole "you need me more than i need you" thing is very obvious. I would try adding some lyrics that wouldnt give that away so early, you know? But I do like where this song is going.

does it really give that feeling? eh not wat i was going for ill work on it thanks anyway bro