Does anyone have an idea for a title?

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    LyricsAngel said:

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    Even the blood is numbing in my veins
    I don’t understand how you trapped me with no chains
    I squeeze my brain to find a reason for what you do to me
    But all over again I find how closely you’re watching me
    Cause when I stop to think I feel your breath down my neck
    Why won’t you give me my life back?

    -Chorus-
    The walls are closing in and I’m freaking out
    I’m trying to scream but no words come out
    You took all the air and now I’m choking
    You know everything I say but you don’t hear me yell
    I don’t think that rain hides my cries so well
    You just don’t care as much as you’ve spoken

    Even the air’s impossible to breathe
    I don’t understand how I have been so naïve
    There’s a veil on my eyes that won’t let me see trough this window
    But you can, so if I tried to run you’d be the first to know
    Cause when I stop to breathe I feel your eyes fixing mine
    Why won’t you get out of my mind?

    -Chorus-
    The walls are closing in and I’m freaking out
    I’m trying to scream but no words come out
    You took all the air and now I’m choking
    You know everything I do but you don’t live this hell
    I don’t think I can pretend so well
    You just don’t care as much as you’ve spoken

    -Bridge-
    There was a love like a light for the darkest hours
    There were smiles, there were laughs, there were flowers
    Just like bait for me to go your direction
    Now it’s just four walls that keep me here
    Now it’s all scars, it’s all pain, it’s all tears
    Every glimpse of light died, swallowed by your obsession

    -Chorus-
    The walls are closing in and I’m freaking out
    I’m trying to scream but no words come out
    You took all the air and now I’m choking
    I know how to do it all but I can’t live your way
    I don’t think I can live mine today
    I just don’t care enough to be broken

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    I was thinking about "Freaking Out". What do you say?
    This song is very personal for me. Soon enough, I'll go to a studio and this is the song I want to record So please be honest
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    well i will say it well-written. from your song describing to be that you were suffocated and scare from the obsession of another person. Actually that what also i feel as well from the relationship. anyway well it seem your song are going 2 direction of saying that you are freaking out and being suffocated from the obsession from that person so i will say that you can try "Freaking out" or I'm choking from your obsession" but then again the second title doesn't fit there. maybe "Suffocation"? oh well i tried.
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    Thank you, I guess I'll stick to "Freaking Out".
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.