Falling From Grace - Review Please

I've been writing songs for a few years, and wonder what other people think about soemthing I've wrote. All comments appreciated.

Falling From Grace


Daylight is breaking
The rage is encasing
It’s in the making
Life is for taking
The pain is awaking

It’s all broken up
And it’s falling apart
My pride is escaping
From this damaged heart

Burning, Crashing

Chorus
Now I’m falling from grace
No danger I can face
Why, I’m losing the chase
Cause’ I’m falling from grace


Lost my desire
I cannot acquire
All I require
You left to conspire
Against my empire


Crumbled into ruin
It’s all torn apart
Its soul escaping
From its embittered body

Burning, Crashing

Now I’m falling from grace
No danger I can face
Why, I’m losing the chase
Cause’ I’m falling from grace

Dropping without a warning
No-one will be mourning


Now I’m falling from grace
No danger I can face
Why, I’m losing the chase
Cause’ I’m falling from grace

Now I’m falling from grace
No danger I can face
Why, I’m losing the chase
Cause’ I’m falling from grace

Falling from grace

I like this lyrics.