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I know a word, which is never heard in this world
The word is 'true', you know it too in this world
Please me friend, help me burn it down
I know a word, a simple word in this world
The word is 'lie', seems to 'die' in this world
Please me friend, help me burn it down
Burn it down

Burn it down or shall we lifted?
Shall be kings or ever gifted?
Or withered roses
On the crosses
No, never!
We will fight!

Let the world and all the children dying?
Let the reapers kill and kings lying?
We, soulless slaves
Around the graves
No, never!
We will fight!

Gold miners versus dictators in this world
Do what they can, kill every man in this world
Please me friend, help me burn it down
No more men, fighting men in this world
No more word, none to learn in this world
Please me friend, help me burn it down
Burn it down

Counting down to 0
Finding how to die
Counting down to 0
A life for every lie

Counting down to 0
Finding how to die
Counting down to 0
A life for every lie

As long as there's still life in me
I will fight for what I can't be:
Freed from pain
And loved

Twilight from Earth is comin' to me
It's hard to believe there's no hope to see
Millions die and no one can live
Billion years and this one last relief
I'm comin' down here to see you again
It could be the last time so look at me men

Look at this, the Heaven's cryin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Stop the warrin', stop the lyin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Take my word to see tomorrow
And you will never have to sorrow
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain

Oh!

The black blood of Texas is flowing on Earth
The blue pretty oceans are dying, it's worse
The angels are screaming but no one has heard
It's easy to think you have no mind to learn
The last chance I give you what Father gave me
The last hope you will see is the power of me

Look at this, the Heaven's cryin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Stop the warrin', stop the lyin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Take my word to see tomorrow
And you will never have to sorrow
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain

No!

Father's still crying 'What have I done?'
But here is the last chance, it's nearly gone
Oh you can't see the reason, to take my word for
You think when it ends, you'll knock Saint Peter's door
By now it's needless, needless to say
Here is the judgement, call it Doomsday

I ask for the reason
'Why can't I find?'
In every season
I'm asking 'Why?'

Look at this, the Heaven's cryin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Stop the warrin', stop the lyin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Take my word to see tomorrow
And you will never have to sorrow
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain

Look at this, the Heaven's cryin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Stop the warrin', stop the lyin'
Just because the world is dyin'
Take my word to see tomorrow
And you will never have to sorrow
Break the deadlock, break up this chain
'Cause Gaia is still feelin' the pain
I stop this sh*t, this f*ckin' sayin'
Lucifer will start the playin'...

Have I seen it before?
Charming smile on your face
Have I been here before?

Share your last time walk
In Dead Man's Garden
Share your last time kiss
Leave and be my warden

Leave me once again
Leave me with the leech
Just cry for the whole world
And never cry for me

Leave the forest, the Moonlight Falls
Leave the stars' rest, the Golden Halls
Leave me here to die
And sing a lullaby
Where all our dreams reside
Sing me a lullaby

Share your last time walk
It is all my garden
Share your last time kiss
Leave me with my warden

My star in the misty sky
Will always light your ways
My spirit will guard your dreams
'Til the last light remains

Leave the forest, the Moonlight Falls
Leave the stars' rest, the Golden Halls
Leave me here to die
And sing a lullaby
Where all our dreams reside
Sing me a lullaby

Leave the forest, the Moonlight Falls
Leave the stars' rest, the Golden Halls
Leave me here to die
And sing a lullaby
Where all our dreams reside
Sing me a lullaby

Where all our dreams reside
Sing me a lullaby

Every beacon in a forgotten shore
Every letter from a long lost home
Turns to an echo in me

Where angel beauties learn to fly
Where heartless lovers turn to dust
Lead me back there once again

Last ship on ocean
No more devotion
The Fallen's last journey to the perfect hideaway
With captains of all ships that ever went astray
The Eternal Ocean

The everlasting loneliness
The calling from the deep

Back to the old reef where I once heard your name
Sirens whispered and mermaids brought you to me

Abandon all hope
The last one has gone
What I've always longed for
The last prophecy to be done

The old sailor sings his last song to the sea
A broken shell holds the memories of me

Last ship on ocean
No more devotion
The Fallen's last journey to the perfect hideaway
With captains of all ships that ever went astray
The Eternal Ocean

Back to the old reef where I once heard your name
Sirens whispered and mermaids brought you to me
Where I always wished to be

I wanna get lost again in your mirage cosmos
I wanna feel you, feel the magic in between us
Splash in your ocean
In slow motion
Deep kiss stealing
Your lover's bleeding
I wanna get this sweet hot feeling

Screaming like a banshee, maybe you will blind me
Strip my mind!
Say 'I wanna feel you inside, feel in dark and daylight'
Get me now!
Don't spend the time with talking, with endless and slow walking
Let's get inside!
The sinner party's starting, do it like the lightning
Take me high!

You're my cover and I am your pride
You are Jackill and I'm mr. Hyde
Come kiss and show me
Deep and slowly
French kiss stealing
My heart's bleeding
I wanna get this passion feeling

I'll be the nectar on your lips
I wanna feel it whenever you kiss
I could be your ever dreaming night
I, the solace in your eyes

Screaming like a banshee, maybe you will blind me
Strip my mind!
Say 'I wanna feel you inside, feel in dark and daylight'
Get me now!
Don't spend the time with talking, with endless and slow walking
Let's get inside!
The sinner party's starting, do it like the lightning
Take me high!

Screaming like a banshee, maybe you will blind me
Strip my mind!
Say 'I wanna feel you inside, feel in dark and daylight'
Get me now!
Don't spend the time with talking, with endless and slow walking
Let's get inside!
The sinner party's starting, do it like the lightning
Take me high!

Take me!

Once upon a wishful night
A raven's out for weak and blind
Mighty beast from the nightly shore
Raven lord named 'Nevermore'

Searched the raven, for hopeless souls
Damned prisoners of broken rules
Then I found him at my door
Raven lord named 'Nevermore'

'Who has sent you, Lord, to me
Shall I meet the Heaven's Queen?'
Standing at my chamber door
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

Another riddler arosed in me
'Shall I go to Hell indeed?'
As I just stood at the door
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

More then ever, I felt anger
'Fly away now hellish stranger!'
Shouted at him at my door
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

Weakness caught me, so suddenly
My heart beated, I felt hardly
I hoped I feel this pain no more
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

As the weakness just grew stronger
Easy breathing then no longer
'Will I get up from the floor?'
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

Once upon a midnight dreary
While I pondered weak and weary
I had my soul caught by that shadow
I shall return never-nevermore!

Born from dust and made of sand
Must go away to white shore lands
Torn apart from all the days with his love

As the old crow flies away
He will live for one more day
Far from God, far from home where he must stay

Dark wanderer from silent grave
The poet in the masquerade
Angel beauties will carry him no more

Save me

Leave me now, my time is counting
So alone, I'm the beast in the hunting
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Take me home
No shelter in sight
Mighty God has
Forsaken the blind
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Save me

I remember the old times
The roses and the wines
I remember your smiles
As the daylight brightened your face and glimmered in your eyes
Angel of me
Everlasting beauty

The twilights at the lake
We walked there every day
And as the eagle flew away
We just lay and I promised you will never be afraid
Angel of me
Everlasting beauty

The poet and the bride
At The Altar of The Light
The Light Bearer said
'Everything goes right'
All lies
Everything was lie

It's time to fade away
Complete the passion play
Take me away
Lucifer, Azazel
Now show the way
Fade away, turn away

As the widow cries blood tears
The poet's chased by faceless fears
Violent wind blows his ashes far away

The Shining Path will be sparkling once again
All lies
Everything was lie

Save me

Leave me now, my time is counting
So alone, I'm the beast in the hunting
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Take me home
No shelter in sight
Mighty God has
Forsaken the blind
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Save me

Wanderer, Forever Walker
Has no time
No time to see her
Fade to Hell
His home it will be

Alone in the dark
Without love, without hope
Without dreams
Alone in the cold

The last rose on the poet's grave
Will wither as he slowly fades away

Save me

Leave me now, my time is counting
So alone, I'm the beast in the hunting
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Take me home
No shelter in sight
Mighty God has
Forsaken the blind
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Save me

Rest in silence without peace
Rest in chains without words
Rest in silence
Rest in chains
Rest and suffer without dreams

Leave me now, my time is counting
So alone, I'm the beast in the hunting
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Take me home
No shelter in sight
Mighty God has
Forsaken the blind
I have no words, no time for crying
Pendulum strikes my last day of life
Save me

Born from dust and made of sand
Must go away to white shore lands
Torn apart from all the days with his love

"This night gives birth to my fears and the death I've always longed for.
Something shall never fade away but me.
The Death within me is endless and eternal.
Remember, no victory without defeat, no glory without suffering
and the words of innocence are always written with blood.

The poet is dead and silent forever but the poetry is immortal.
The words he wrote are for the forsaken and forgotten soul
and the Angel he always loved.
No one have felt such pain and love and never will..."

The ultimate pain will happen eventually
The Fallen will suffer by the Devils horn
And in silence he shall reborn

Whisper into the wind one last time
Search for the heart that once was mine
Call of the wild, dreams of the child
Begin

Sleep among the wolves
Dream with the spirits of the Air

Still I believe I will be free
Join to the spirits of wild
Still I hope the crying's end will come
The wind caresses me
Still I know you see
Still I wish for the rain
For the end of pain
For the streams and fire
My last desire

Hunt with the hawks, my natural high
Bears and the owls, my brothers of wild
Call of the light, the wilderness' child
Dream

Sleep among the wolves
Dream with the spirits of the Air

I want to see the land as the eagle can
Feel the ancient souls of the old mountain

One with the wild
This is me
Cries of a child
It's from me
Far from the world's shade
I want to be

Sleep among the wolves
Dream with the spirits of the Air

Sleep among the wolves
Dream with the spirits of the Air

Fall down in the cold soul whirlwind
Come with a sliver of shade
Learn to take shape of a lycan
Lessons to don't be a slave

Don't think of what will be the ending
Don't live in deep forge of love
I tried to fight with the good end the evil
But the Great Lord said 'You don't decide!'

Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
I'm the Fallen I dance with the blades
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
But I'll fight for you through Tartaros fields

Don't think of what will be the ending
Don't live in deep forge of love
I'm falling to deep from the Heaven
Demons keep my soul deep inside

Fall down in the cold soul whirlwind
Come with a sliver of shade
Ride through the tears of the hollow
Your spirit shows me the way

Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
I'm the Fallen I dance with the blades
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
But I'll fight for you through Tartaros fields

Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen
Fallen, Fallen

Azriel sang to me
Crestfallen into Neverland
In this cruel fantasy
No one can save you

"Now you dare into my world..."

Forsaken falling from the Eternal High
The lasts of the nightmares, banished from the light
Hearing the endless call of the ancient bells
The path far from the Heaven, a step to Hell
I'd better rest in my dreams no more
Lost the heart of poet of elven lore

"Bwa hah hah! Now welcome your old friend..."

A long seen face of a bastard child
Becoming real again, believe your eyes
Worst of the hunters is out of cage
Priests of the last gods have their rage

Run away, far away
Your soul's being hunted
Fly away, so away
Your life's being wanted
Run!

Every robber on the side of Christ
All of them got their own prizes

Tell me, Lord of the rest
Why pray for nothing?
My kingdom to come
My kingdom of death
As the king falls down
The kingdom of my deep

Run away, far away
Your soul's being hunted
Fly away, so away
Your life's being wanted
Run!

Run away, far away
Your soul's being hunted
Fly away, so away
Your life's being wanted
Run!

"You have nothing to end this nightmare.
You are not a hero, not an angel.
You're just a fallen one, sent to my arms by the God."

"All of them got their own prizes..."

Walking with you in the snow
Away from the dark sorrow
I cannot hear the children cry
A star's falling down from the sky

White winter magic

Holding your hand in the snow
Snowfall is your holy gown
I cannot feel the endless pain
Maiden's innocence to break my chain

White winter magic

Feeling you breath in the snow
Tamed to hold you evermore
In this moment, more then ever
I wish for the snow to last forever

My winter magic
With you

Originally Posted by Aave

Once upon a wishful night
A raven's out for weak and blind
Mighty beast from the nightly shore
Raven lord named 'Nevermore'

Searched the raven, for hopeless souls
Damned prisoners of broken rules
Then I found him at my door
Raven lord named 'Nevermore'

'Who has sent you, Lord, to me
Shall I meet the Heaven's Queen?'
Standing at my chamber door
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

Another riddler arosed in me
'Shall I go to Hell indeed?'
As I just stood at the door
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

More then ever, I felt anger
'Fly away now hellish stranger!'
Shouted at him at my door
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

Weakness caught me, so suddenly
My heart beated, I felt hardly
I hoped I feel this pain no more
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

As the weakness just grew stronger
Easy breathing then no longer
'Will I get up from the floor?'
Quoth the raven, 'Nevermore'

Once upon a midnight dreary
While I pondered weak and weary
I had my soul caught by that shadow
I shall return never-nevermore!

The thing I like about this song is that is open to different interpretations. I can think of a thing or two why you wrote the lyrics and your personal emotion behind the words, but I'll be getting it wrong. I'd rather interpret the song my own way and the words and the way the song is written makes it possible, so that's a very good thing meaning your lyrics are good. I also appreciate the dark heavy emotions behind the words, so maybe a suggestion when played some parts of the song can be screamed out instead of singing them. I think it would at to the that dark emotion transforming the lyrics to a great piece of music. So I like it very much the title especially and the raven makes the metaphor all complete. I red an other of your songs Longing & the ocean I like that even more , I'll leave a comment behind maybe later on. Keep the good work and you do play an instrument I assume , maybe you already have the fitting music, if so please tell me about it the chords, arrangements, strumming pattern etc.

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