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Last edited by Zakynthos; 04-19-2020 at 03:57 PM.
How can everyone be killed and yet no one die? Is this death metal?
No, it's not even metal. It's just a contradiction which means although we sometimes have a bad time, we can still overcome it.
dude i till say this is by far your best work of all time keep at it man snd i second what you said although we go through hard times we will always prevail.
Three o'clock A.M. is always too late or too early for anything you want to do.
so true
I like the lyrics. I'm not a native speaker of English, so my opinion may not count, but anyway, here are some lines that sound out of place to me.
PS. If you have the time, please write a couple of words regarding my post: http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...ls-review.html
Wow, pretty darn good, the final line seems a bit out of place.I personally think this would work well as a rap in places. But this is your best so far. Keep up the good work man.
Thank you. Why do those lines seem out of place?
You know, as I said, I'm not a native speaker, so I can't say something objective like "this line has a different style than the rest of the song", but that's how I feel. Like they are more "earthly" and awkward
I would like to hear it as an actual song, what type of music are you thinking about putting to it?
I really like this. Especially the outro. Great job!
We're a little bit stranger on the inside
Thank you! =)
This is a very nice set of lyrics.
And I understand that ATL members may consider them as a result of
a fictional storyline.
But there aren't.
They DO describe "some kind" of reality.
I liked your "weighting" of minimalism and your "pauses".
I only suggest you should try to pick up some more "unusual" words,
without loosing the orientation of your goals.
"Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to?
You will never find that life for which you are looking.
When the gods created man they allotted to him death,
but life they retained in their own keeping"