Thirst For Life

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How can everyone be killed and yet no one die? Is this death metal?

No, it's not even metal. It's just a contradiction which means although we sometimes have a bad time, we can still overcome it.

dude i till say this is by far your best work of all time keep at it man snd i second what you said although we go through hard times we will always prevail.

I like the lyrics. I'm not a native speaker of English, so my opinion may not count, but anyway, here are some lines that sound out of place to me.

Originally Posted by Zakynthos

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Will we have our youth back?

How to break this heavy aura...

My insatiable thirst for life

...you know, to find a way

As if everything was fine!

PS. If you have the time, please write a couple of words regarding my post: http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...ls-review.html

Wow, pretty darn good, the final line seems a bit out of place.I personally think this would work well as a rap in places. But this is your best so far. Keep up the good work man.

Thank you. Why do those lines seem out of place?

You know, as I said, I'm not a native speaker, so I can't say something objective like "this line has a different style than the rest of the song", but that's how I feel. Like they are more "earthly" and awkward

I would like to hear it as an actual song, what type of music are you thinking about putting to it?

Originally Posted by jailhouserock

I would like to hear it as an actual song, what type of music are you thinking about putting to it?

Something slow, I'm not really sure.

I really like this. Especially the outro. Great job!

Thank you! =)

This is a very nice set of lyrics.
And I understand that ATL members may consider them as a result of
a fictional storyline.
But there aren't.
They DO describe "some kind" of reality.

I liked your "weighting" of minimalism and your "pauses".
I only suggest you should try to pick up some more "unusual" words,
without loosing the orientation of your goals.