Originally Posted by
PaulF721
Sorry Lady A, but there are a few problems with your translation:
1. You have come as the present tense - it should really be in the command tense. Yours would translate as "you are coming to take these eyes."
2. You have it in the Tu form - in context, because Blind Mag is saying this to Rotti Largo (her master/boss), she would have to use the formal command form (Lei), not informal (Tu).
3. Not really a problem, but because she's a female singing it, she would have to use cieca, the feminine form of the adjective.
-Paul