Khaled Ajaj - Wa7dany [*]

As-salamu 3alikum!

I have tried to translate three songs, namely the song from Khaled Ajaj - Wa7dany, the song from Mustafa Amar - Ba7ebek and the song from Dalida - 7aram!

I posted each translation in a separate thread! I would very much appreciate if somebody took a look, corrected my mistakes and filled in the gaps!

The first one:
Khaled Ajaj - Wa7dany

أملى عمري زعلان ليه
My hope, my life, why are you upset?
مالك أمري بتهرب ليه
The master of my life/matter, why are you escaping?
قلبي في حبي تقسى عليه
You are cruel with my heart in its love to you
مش داري بي يا حبيبي ولا إيه.
You don’t care about me/you don't feel me or what?

وحداني والقلب وحيد
I am alone and my heart is alone
وحداني وحبيبي بعيد
I am alone and my lover is away
وحداني واشتقت إليك
I am alone and I missed you

روح قله يا ليل
Oh night, go and tell her
أنا قلبي عليل
My heart is sick
قله هواية و دوايه في ايديه
Tell him that my air and my cure are in her hands
حنن حبيبي
Soften my lover
صبر لهيبي
Ask my flame (longing) to be patient
آه يانا دنا وحشتني عنيه.
Ah, I miss her eyes

لا عيني ناموا
My eyes didn't sleep
من يوم خصاموا
Since the day we fought
ليالي وأنا حالي ببكي عليه
Many nights and I am crying about her
ولا سلاموا
And there are no salutes
ولا كلاموا
And there are no words
آهاتى ماليه حياتى بعديه
My pains are filling my life after her

Wa alaikoum as-salam wa rahmato Allah
Perfect ya 7abibaty, you're very good, excellent

أملى عمري زعلان ليه
My hope, my life, why are you upsetting me?
why are you upset

مالك أمري بتهرب ليه
The master of my problems, why are you escaping?
I'd prefer saying "the master of my life/ matter"

قلبي في حبي تقسى عليه
You are cruel with my heart in its love to you
مش داري بي يا حبيبي ولا إيه.
You don’t care about me or what?
you can also say: You don't feel me or what

أنا قلبي عليل
My heart is sad
My heart is sick

لا عيني ناموا
My eyes don’t sleep
My eyes didn't sleep
من يوم خصاموا
The day is the enemy
Since the day we fought
ليالي وأنا حالي ببكي عليه
My nights and I am crying about her
Many nights and I'm crayingn about her
ولا سلاموا
And there is no peace
there's no salutes
ولا كلاموا
And there are no words

آهاتي مليا حياتي لعينيه.
My pains of my life are for a long time in her eyes
My pains are filling my life because of him/her

Thank you! But i still have a lot to practice!

Originally Posted by Layla

As-salamu 3alikum!

I have tried to translate three songs, namely the song from Khaled Ajaj - Wa7dany, the song from Mustafa Amar - Ba7ebek and the song from Dalida - 7aram!

I posted each translation in a separate thread! I would very much appreciate if somebody took a look, corrected my mistakes and filled in the gaps!

The first one:
Khaled Ajaj - Wa7dany

أملى عمري زعلان ليه
My hope, my life, why are you upset?
مالك أمري بتهرب ليه
The master of my life/matter, why are you escaping?
قلبي في حبي تقسى عليه
You are cruel with my heart in its love to you
مش داري بي يا حبيبي ولا إيه.
You don’t care about me/you don't feel me or what?

وحداني والقلب وحيد
I am alone and my heart is alone
وحداني وحبيبي بعيد
I am alone and my lover is away
وحداني واشتقت إليك
I am alone and I missed you

روح قله يا ليل
Oh night, go and tell her
أنا قلبي عليل
My heart is sick
قله هواية و دوايه في ايديه
Tell him that my air and my cure are in her hands
حنن حبيبي
Soften my lover
صبر لهيبي
Ask my flame (longing) to be patient
آه يانا دنا وحشتني عنيه.
Ah, I miss her eyes

لا عيني ناموا
My eyes didn't sleep
من يوم خصاموا
Since the day we fought
ليالي وأنا حالي ببكي عليه
Many nights and I am crying about her
ولا سلاموا
And there are no salutes
ولا كلاموا
And there are no words
آهاتي مليا حياتي لعينيه.
My pains are filling my life because of her

he says اهاتى ماليه حياتى بعديه

pain is filling my life after her or my life after her is full of pain