Black theama - Ba77ar

Hi ,

I need help to correct my translation of ba77ar a very nice song for a new egyptian group - Black theama.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kTHwuh41iNo

http://www.4shared.com/file/12421562...112/Ba7ar.html

بحار ..خايف من المشوار
Ba77ar...khayf men el meshwar
Sailor....I am afraid of the journay
في البحر و انتا بعيد
Fi el ba7r w inta ba3eed
By sea when you are far
الموج تملي يزيد
El maug tamaly izeed
The waves always rise
و يخبي في الاسرار
W ikhaby fi elasrar
and hide the secrets


محبوب.. و مفيكش اي عيوب
Ma7boub ...w mafiksh ayy 3ayoub
Darling.....There are no defects in you
مهما تغيب عالعين
mahma tegheeb 3al3aen
Whatever you move away from view
نورك على الشطين
nourak 3ala eshshaten
your light/the light of your eyes spreads out over the shore
حبك قدر مكتوب
7oubbak 2adar maktoub
Your love is a certain fate

وناس بتحب كل الناس
wa nas bet7eb kull ennas
people might love their fellows (???????)
صوتك يونسني
sotak iouanisni
Your voice comforts me
من نظرة تهوسني
men nazra tehouisni
With a look you get me confused
وعنيك قمر من ماس
w 3aynek 2amar men mas
And your eyes are like a diamond moon

وبدور و بعدي اي بحور
W badour w ba3adi ayy ba7our
full Moons and ?????? wichever seas
تندهلي و انا اروحلك
Tendehli w ana arou7lak
call me but I just go to you
تحضني و ابوحلك
Ta7oudni w abou7lak
hug me but I just reveal myself to you
ده الحب عصفور نور
Da el7oubb 3asfour nour
This love is like a bird of light


Thanks in advance

anyone ?

Great translation, I found no mistakes, but helping you with this:

وبدور و بعدي اي بحور
W badour w ba3adi ayy ba7our
full Moons and ?????? wichever seas
correct trans.: full moons and after me what seas
and the completion of this line's meaning is in the next which you've already translated:
تندهلي و انا اروحلك
Tendehli w ana arou7lak
call me but I just go to you

Thank you Sohuda. I had translated that phrase just as you did it but it didn't make sense for me. I guess he says that no matter full moons and seas call him he allways will go to his beloved. So my question is : How ba3adi is related to badour and ba7our ?
I guess there will be more sense if he says :
w badour w ba3adak ayy ba7our tendehli w ana arou7lak or even W
ba3adak ayy badour w ba7our tendehli w ana arou7lak . Hope you help me to understand that verse. Thanks again

ohhhhhh! I got it!!! I haven't listened to it, so I listened to that line now! and it's a different meaning!
here:
و بدور و بعدي اي بحور تندهلي وانا اروحلك
w badoor w ba3addy ay b7our betendahli w ana baro7lk
and I spin around and cross whatever seas that call after me and I go to you

I see...................so badour is not the plural of badr (full moon) but it is the 1st person of the present tense of the verb dawwar (to spin around/make turn around)

thanks again

Bye

yes bodour is the plural of bdr.. but this is a verb that is in the song 'badour' it's slightly different in pronunciation but same writing in arabic

Salam to all, I have some more comments to say...
Respectfully to all

بحار.. خايف من المشوار
This as you are telling story about a sailor... (and could mean himself... sailorman )
A sailor... afraid of the journey...

في البحر وانت بعيد (and not وانتا if you wish to write it in Fus7a)
In the sea... (as if you're in the middle of it. You used by, which gives you the meaning that you're beside it)

ويخبي فيه الأسرار (and not في) if you used fi the meaning won't be complete, fi what?... but when you say feih, the ha2 pronoun refers to the see.
And that why your translated sentence wasn't complete.
it'll be: it hides secrets in it.

ونـــّاس بتحب كل الناس
Wannas from the verb you did in the next line يونس: it means amusing person who you like to listen to his speech and enjoy it as well. (I think ونيس is more common)
Amusing, (and you) Love all people

وبدور وبعدّي أي بحور
بدور: means circulate, Here it could mean: I go over seas, and cross any sea (or all the seas)
and b3addi, with shaddah over dal


تحضني وأبوحلك
You hug me and I reveal you my secrets

This's just jumped into my mind
for وناس it's as we call it صيغة مبالغة from ونيس

(In fact I felt that line was strange and doesn't suit in its place, when it was translated as, and people love...)

alf shoukran ya Oriee. Everything is clear now

You're so welcom mrx. G anytime