Her Final Words

This is a song about the torment intolerance can cause, the woman is a lesbian.

HER FINAL WORDS

She epitomizes torment.
Everyone looks down on her...
Because her love is not conventional.
Her sanity's demise: slow, but eventual.

The woman is a fighter...
But she holds too much inside her.
One day she is bound to burst.
She cannot control this curse.

Why do we hate...
That which we don't understand?
Why does our fate...
Lie in society's dirty hands?

Her mouth remains shut, but in those eyes...
In those beautiful eyes, I see all I need know.
On this day, she leaves this world of lies.
Before she goes, she will give those ****s a show.

Begging...
I'm begging her...
Don't be stupid.
Trying...
To save her life.
*****, don't be stupid.
Sorry...
Sorry I couldn't do more.

Why do we hate...
That which we don't understand?
Why does our fate...
Lie in society's dirty hands?

She pulls the shotty from her purse.
She takes the antogonists first...
Then she sticks the barrel down her throat.
In her hand lies her final words, a note...

Why do we hate...
That which we don't understand?
Why does our fate...
Lie in society's dirty hands?


Please feel free to share your thoughts.

Very well done. I notice a lot of how I write in what I saw here. It's a shame that these kinds of stories float about, and even more of a shame knowing that they actually happen. I actually wrote one on the same subject that I feel goes hand in hand with your effort here, the difference being that it's from the point of view of the victim rather than from a third party's perspective. Here's the link, I'd love to know what you think.

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...ide-river.html

It's good to know people are reading my stuff and it's evoking some sort of emotional response in some. I don't have time to read yours right now, but I'll make sure I do later. Go ahead and read my other stuff in the forum if you like.

Thanks.

very very good have you ever offered any artist to write for them? also can you check out mine and tell me what you all think

No, I haven't talked to anyone at all about it, I really don't think my stuff is that good.
I will check out ur new one right now. Thanks for reading.

Btw where is Sasaktchewan? Is that Canada?

ya its in canada

can u check out my new one and tell me how it is it took me only like 20 mins to write lol

Of course I will. Can you read "Theft" and share your thoughts with me please?

I'ma add you as a friend. If you ever need song-writing advice, don't hesitate to ask me.

k please checkout my "dear mr insane" and my " need a chorus someone help"