Mostafa Kamel - Wana maly

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    Hey!

    Do you have the lyrics of this song please?


    Thanks in advance...
    “If cats looked like frogs we'd realize what nasty, cruel little bastards they are. Style. That's what people remember.” ― Terry Pratchett.
     
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    وانا مالى وانا مالى اه وانا مالى ما عينيك
    هيه اللى بدت هيه اللى قوام على قلبى ندت وقالتلى كلام
    هيه اللى رمت على رمشى سلام
    وانا برده بشر
    اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    وانا قلبى بايدى الله انا مالى لو دق يا سيدى
    الله كده سبت عينيك شغلونى
    الله بعدين راجعين يلومونى
    الله اها وانا مالى دانت اللى جميل وقمر
    وانا قلت يا ريت يجمعنا قدر
    على بابى دقيت والحب قمر
    دبت وحبيت مانا برده بشر
    اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    وانا اغمى عيونى الله مانت اللى عينيك خطفونى
    الله كده تشغل عقلى وبالى الله
    بعدين تيجيبونى
    وانا مالى الله اها اه وانا مالى
    دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى وبعدين
    وياك ده الحب شقى مقدرش انساك عطشان
    للقى وانا يعنى ملاك
    دانا برده بشر اها وانا مالى اها انا مالى
    اها وانا مالى يابو نظره جريئه
    الله انا صافى والنيه بريئه
    الله بلا حيره بلا لعب شباب الله انا داخل البيت من الباب
    الله اها وانا مالى دانا عمرى ما كنت كده
    وياما شفت كتير ادى من ده وده
    وندت المجادير على قلبى ندى ارحم يا كبير
    دانا برده بشر اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    دى حاجات مكتوبه الله واهى جت من اول
    نوبه الله نظره ومدرتش بحالى
    الله وانا جبت حاجات من بالى
    اها اه وانا مالى دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى
    وبعدين وياك ده الحب شقى مقدرش انساك
    عطشان للقى وانا يعنى ملاك دانا برده
    بشر اها وانا مالى اها انا مالى اها وانا
    لا يَشْكُرُ الله مَنْ لا يَشْكُرُ النَّاس
    The One Who Doesn't Thank Others, Doesn't Thank God
     
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    جزاك الله خيرا يا أختي الحلوة

    “If cats looked like frogs we'd realize what nasty, cruel little bastards they are. Style. That's what people remember.” ― Terry Pratchett.
     
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    جزانا وإياك كل الخير.... أنت الأحلى والأجمل
    لا يَشْكُرُ الله مَنْ لا يَشْكُرُ النَّاس
    The One Who Doesn't Thank Others, Doesn't Thank God
     
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    Hi! Can someone please check and correct my "work"?? Sorry if there are many mistakes it's my first attempt at translating an arabic song

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    وانا مالى وانا مالى اه وانا مالى ما عينيك
    Wana maly, wana maly, ah wana maly ma 3ainik
    I don’t have, I don’t have, ah I don’t have your eyes

    هيه اللى بدت هيه اللى قوام على قلبى ندت وقالتلى كلام
    Hiyah elli badit hiyah elli 2awam 3ala 2albi nadit w 2aletly kalam
    She’s the one who started, the one who stepped into my heart and began telling me words

    هيه اللى رمت على رمشى سلام
    Hiyah elli ramit 3ala ramshi salam
    She’s the one who ruined my peace in the blink of an eye

    وانا برده بشر
    Wana barduh bashar
    And I’m still a person

    اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    Aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly
    Aha, and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have

    وانا قلبى بايدى الله انا مالى لو دق يا سيدى
    Wana 2albi beydi allah ana maly law da2 ya sayiddi
    And my heart is in my hands (God) but I don’t have it even if it’s beating, oh Lord

    الله كده سبت عينيك شغلونى
    Allah kedah sbat 3ainik shaghaloony
    (God) so your eyes rested and took over me

    الله بعدين راجعين يلومونى
    Allah ba3din raga3in yaloomoony
    (God) afterwards they came back and reproached me

    الله اها وانا مالى دانت اللى جميل وقمر
    Allah aha wana maly danat elli gamil w 2amar
    (God) aha, and I don’t have close to me that which is beautiful and a moon

    وانا قلت يا ريت يجمعنا قدر
    Wana 2olt ya reit yagma3ana 2adar
    And I said I hope destiny will bring us together

    على بابى دقيت والحب قمر
    3ala babi da2it wel 7ob 2amar
    You knocked on my door, and love is a moon

    دبت وحبيت مانا برده بشر
    Dbit w 7abeit mana barduh bashar
    I melted and loved, but I’m still a person

    اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    Aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly
    Aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have

    وانا اغمى عيونى الله مانت اللى عينيك خطفونى
    Wana aghma 3ayuni allah manat elli 3ainik khatafoony
    And I blindfold my eyes (God) grateful that your eyes snatched me

    الله كده تشغل عقلى وبالى الله
    Allah kedah tashghil 32ly w baly allah
    (God) so my reason and my mind are busy (God)

    بعدين تيجيبونى
    Ba3din taygyaboony
    Later they reflected me

    وانا مالى الله اها اه وانا مالى
    Wana maly allah aha ah wana maly
    And I don’t have (God) aha ah I don’t have

    دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى وبعدين
    Dana 2albi w ag3ani ba2a w ba3adin
    My heart made me hungry, stopped and after that

    وياك ده الحب شقى مقدرش انساك عطشان
    Weyek dah el7ob sha2a ma2adarsh ansek 3atshan
    With you this love was unhappy, I can’t forget you, I’m thirsty

    للقى وانا يعنى ملاك
    Lil2a wana ya3ni malak
    For being with you and I’m so to say an angel

    دانا برده بشر اها وانا مالى اها انا مالى
    Dana barduh bashar aha wana maly aha wana maly
    I’m still a person aha and I don’t have and I don’t have

    اها وانا مالى يابو نظره جريئه
    Aha wana maly yabu nazarh garai2h
    Aha and I don’t have a naughty gaze

    الله انا صافى والنيه بريئه
    Allah ana safi weniyah bari2ah
    (God) I’m honest and my intentions are good

    الله بلا حيره بلا لعب شباب الله انا داخل البيت من الباب
    Allah bala 7irah bala la3ab shabab allah wana dakhelel beyt minel bab
    (God) without confusion or children’s games (God) I came into the house through the door

    الله اها وانا مالى دانا عمرى ما كنت كده
    Allah aha wana maly dana 3omri ma konti kedah
    (God) aha and I don’t have my life, I wasn’t like this

    وياما شفت كتير ادى من ده وده
    W yama shufat ktir ada min dah w dah
    And how many times I saw many cases of this and that

    وندت المجادير على قلبى ندى ارحم يا كبير
    W nadat elmagadir 3ala 2albi nada ar7am ya kbir
    And what happened sneaked into my heart, have mercy oh Lord

    دانا برده بشر اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    Dana barduh bashar aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly
    I’m still a person aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have

    دى حاجات مكتوبه الله واهى جت من اول نوبه
    Da 7agat maktubh allah w hiya gat min awal nubh
    These things are written by God, and she arrived the first time

    الله نظره ومدرتش بحالى
    (Allah) nazarh w madaritsh bi7aly
    (God) one look and I couldn’t avoid the situation

    الله وانا جبت حاجات من بالى
    Allah wana gbit 7agat min bali
    (God) and I encountered things from my mind

    اها اه وانا مالى دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى
    Aha ah wana maly dana 2albi w ag3ani ba2a
    Aha ah and I don’t have, and my heart made me hungry and stopped

    وبعدين وياك ده الحب شقى مقدرش انساك
    W ba3adin weyek dah el7ob sha2a ma2adarish ansek
    And later on and with you, this love became suffering, but I can’t forget you

    عطشان للقى وانا يعنى ملاك دانا برده
    3atshan lil2a wana ya3ni malak dana barduh
    I yearn to meet you and I’m so to say an angel, but still

    بشر اها وانا مالى اها انا مالى اها وانا
    Bashar aha wana maly aha ana maly aha wana
    I’m a person aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have
    “If cats looked like frogs we'd realize what nasty, cruel little bastards they are. Style. That's what people remember.” ― Terry Pratchett.
     
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    nicely done! But there are a few notes I want to say on this:
    1. the name of the song is wana maly,, I think it means whats in it for me meaning I have nothing to do with this, not as in I don't have

    2. هيه اللى رمت على رمشى سلام
    it means she's the one who said hello to my eyelash


    دبت وحبيت مانا برده بشر.3
    Dbit w 7abeit mana barduh bashar
    I melted and loved, but I’m still a person (not 'but I'm still a person' it's 'because I'm only human')

    4.
    اها وانا مالى يابو نظره جريئه
    Aha wana maly yabu nazarh garai2h
    Aha and I don’t have a naughty gaze (not 'I' don't have a naughty gave.. it's 'you' who has a naughty look

    5.
    دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى وبعدين
    Dana 2albi w ag3ani ba2a w ba3adin
    My heart made me hungry, stopped and after that (not hungry, it's 'my heart is hurting')

    6.
    الله نظره ومدرتش بحالى
    (Allah) nazarh w madaritsh bi7aly
    (God) one look and I couldn’t avoid the situation
    (not avoid the situation... it's I wasn't aware of my situation)

    7.
    عطشان للقى وانا يعنى ملاك دانا برده
    3atshan lil2a wana ya3ni malak dana barduh
    I yearn to meet you and I’m so to say an angel, but still
    the correct trans: I'm thirsty (yearn is also correct) for meeting you I'm no angel I'm only human


    Great trans. because it's your first, I'm sure you'll improve more and more,, just keep translating til you become perfect, lol
    Hope you don't mind my over-correcting your trans.
    The hours of pain have yielded good,
    Which prosperous days refused;
    As herbs, though scentless when entire,
    Spread fragrance when they’re bruised.
     
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    Oh Dear Cici, You're so welcomed with or without translation mistakes, Don't ever worry about that...

    نبدا باسم الله

    وانا مالى وانا مالى اه وانا مالى ما عينيك
    Wana maly, wana maly, ah wana maly ma 3ainik
    I don’t have, I don’t have, ah I don’t have your eyes
    Wana mali means: It's not my business, what can I do, or I think here it means it's out of my hand.

    هيه اللى بدت هيه اللى قوام على قلبى ندت وقالتلى كلام
    Hiyah elli badit hiyah elli 2awam 3ala 2albi nadit w 2aletly kalam
    She’s the one who started, the one who stepped into my heart and began telling me words
    This line should complete the first one: so (Heyia) pronoun refers to her eyes
    ندت : called


    هيه اللى رمت على رمشى سلام
    Hiyah elli ramit 3ala ramshi salam
    She’s the one who ruined my peace in the blink of an eye
    Heyia stil refers to her eyes,
    (Your eyes) are the one which said hi to me. (threw salute over my eyelashes)

    وانا برده بشر
    Wana barduh bashar
    And I’m still a person

    اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    Aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly
    Aha, and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have

    وانا قلبى بايدى الله انا مالى لو دق يا سيدى
    Wana 2albi beydi allah ana maly law da2 ya sayiddi
    And my heart is in my hands (God) but I don’t have it even if it’s beating, oh Lord.
    And my heart is in my hands, Oh my God, It's out of my hands, even if it beat

    الله كده سبت عينيك شغلونى
    Allah kedah sbat 3ainik shaghaloony
    (God) so your eyes rested and took over me
    Yeseeb يسيب: is to leave, or allow
    Why you allowd your eyes to take my mind


    الله بعدين راجعين يلومونى
    Allah ba3din raga3in yaloomoony
    Oh my(God) afterwards they came back and reproached me

    الله اها وانا مالى دانت اللى جميل وقمر
    Allah aha wana maly danat elli gamil w 2amar
    (God) aha, and I don’t have close to me that which is beautiful and a moon
    .... You're the beautiful one and the moon

    وانا قلت يا ريت يجمعنا قدر
    Wana 2olt ya reit yagma3ana 2adar
    And I said I hope destiny will bring us together

    على بابى دقيت والحب قمر
    3ala babi da2it wel 7ob 2amar
    You knocked on my door, and love is a moon
    I think the lyrics should be والحب أمر, to be more sensible. sorry for that mistake.
    It'll be Love ordered

    دبت وحبيت مانا برده بشر
    Dbit w 7abeit mana barduh bashar
    I melted and loved, but I’m still a person

    اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    Aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly
    Aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have, aha and I don’t have

    وانا اغمى عيونى الله مانت اللى عينيك خطفونى
    Wana aghma 3ayuni allah manat elli 3ainik khatafoony
    And I blindfold my eyes (God) grateful that your eyes snatched me

    الله كده تشغل عقلى وبالى الله
    Allah kedah tashghil 32ly w baly allah
    (God) so my reason and my mind are busy (God)
    (Why did you do it) like this, take my mind

    بعدين تيجيبونى
    Ba3din taygyaboony
    Later they reflected me
    I think he ment by tegibooni: to cause to die

    وانا مالى الله اها اه وانا مالى
    Wana maly allah aha ah wana maly
    And I don’t have (God) aha ah I don’t have

    دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى وبعدين
    Dana 2albi w ag3ani ba2a w ba3adin
    My heart made me hungry, stopped and after that
    Wage3ni: is: hurting me, hungry means gee3an, gi3an
    My heart is hurting me, what's next


    وياك ده الحب شقى مقدرش انساك عطشان
    Weyek dah el7ob sha2a ma2adarsh ansek 3atshan
    With you this love was unhappy, I can’t forget you, I’m thirsty

    للقى وانا يعنى ملاك
    Lil2a wana ya3ni malak
    For being with you and I’m so to say an angel
    I'm not sure of للقى, since I haven't heard the song
    wana y3ni malak: am I angel?!!


    دانا برده بشر اها وانا مالى اها انا مالى
    Dana barduh bashar aha wana maly aha wana maly
    I’m still a person aha and I don’t have and I don’t have

    اها وانا مالى يابو نظره جريئه
    Aha wana maly yabu nazarh garai2h
    Aha and I don’t have a naughty gaze
    ... the one with naughty gaze

    الله انا صافى والنيه بريئه
    Allah ana safi weniyah bari2ah
    (God) I’m honest and my intentions are good

    الله بلا حيره بلا لعب شباب الله انا داخل البيت من الباب
    Allah bala 7irah bala la3ab shabab allah wana dakhelel beyt minel bab
    (God) without confusion or children’s games (God) I came into the house through the door.
    coming from the door means to propose officially and from her parents

    الله اها وانا مالى دانا عمرى ما كنت كده
    Allah aha wana maly dana 3omri ma konti kedah
    .... I wasn’t like this ever in my life

    وياما شفت كتير ادى من ده وده
    W yama shufat ktir ada min dah w dah
    And how many times I saw many cases of this and that

    وندت المجادير على قلبى ندى ارحم يا كبير
    W nadat elmagadir 3ala 2albi nada ar7am ya kbir
    And what happened sneaked into my heart, have mercy oh Lord
    This is also my mistake: it should be مقادير which means destiny or fate.
    Fate called his heart (to love), May you Mercy me Oh Lord

    دانا برده بشر اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى اها وانا مالى
    Dana barduh bashar aha wana maly aha wana maly aha wana maly
    I’m still a person aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have

    دى حاجات مكتوبه الله واهى جت من اول نوبه
    Da 7agat maktubh allah w hiya gat min awal nubh
    These things are written by God, and it arrived the first time

    الله نظره ومدرتش بحالى
    (Allah) nazarh w madaritsh bi7aly
    (God) one look and I couldn’t avoid the situation
    Oh my God, one look and I didn't know what happened to me

    الله وانا جبت حاجات من بالى
    Allah wana gbit 7agat min bali
    (God) and I encountered things from my mind
    He started to make stories

    اها اه وانا مالى دانا قلبى واجعنى بقى
    Aha ah wana maly dana 2albi w ag3ani ba2a
    Aha ah and I don’t have, and my heart made me hungry and stopped

    وبعدين وياك ده الحب شقى مقدرش انساك
    W ba3adin weyek dah el7ob sha2a ma2adarish ansek
    And later on and with you, this love became suffering, but I can’t forget you

    عطشان للقى وانا يعنى ملاك دانا برده
    3atshan lil2a wana ya3ni malak dana barduh
    I yearn to meet you and I’m so to say an angel, but still

    بشر اها وانا مالى اها انا مالى اها وانا
    Bashar aha wana maly aha ana maly aha wana
    I’m a person aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have aha and I don’t have

    Nice try cici, as time passes you'll become much more better inshallah
    You need to be patient
    لا يَشْكُرُ الله مَنْ لا يَشْكُرُ النَّاس
    The One Who Doesn't Thank Others, Doesn't Thank God
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by citlalli View Post
    it's my first attempt at translating an arabic song
    Akheeran! I love it! You are great!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by sohuda View Post
    nicely done! But there are a few notes I want to say on this:
    1...

    Great trans. because it's your first, I'm sure you'll improve more and more,, just keep translating til you become perfect, lol
    Hope you don't mind my over-correcting your trans.
    Thank you very much Of course I don't mind; quite the opposite, I can't thank you enough for taking your time to go through this
    “If cats looked like frogs we'd realize what nasty, cruel little bastards they are. Style. That's what people remember.” ― Terry Pratchett.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Oriee View Post
    Oh Dear Cici, You're so welcomed with or without translation mistakes, Don't ever worry about that...

    نبدا باسم الله
    ............

    Nice try cici, as time passes you'll become much more better inshallah
    You need to be patient
    LOL Oriee, I thought you had heard it and wrote it down Where did u find the lyrics? I searched and searched, and nothing!

    Thanks a lot for all the corrections and explanations Hehe, I made you guys work a lot Inshallah I'll improve as you said... I just have to keep in mind I need patience (which I don't have a lot of ) Thanks for all your time and effort too dear
    “If cats looked like frogs we'd realize what nasty, cruel little bastards they are. Style. That's what people remember.” ― Terry Pratchett.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Layla View Post
    Akheeran! I love it! You are great!
    I don't think I am that, but thanks for the undeserved compliment I decided to have a go coz someone keeps pulling my leg LOL You're such a good friend dear... thanks
    “If cats looked like frogs we'd realize what nasty, cruel little bastards they are. Style. That's what people remember.” ― Terry Pratchett.
     
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    You're most welcome, looking forward to enjoy your next trans. Keep it up
    The hours of pain have yielded good,
    Which prosperous days refused;
    As herbs, though scentless when entire,
    Spread fragrance when they’re bruised.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Layla View Post
    Akheeran! I love it! You are great!
    What did you love exactly??!!!
    Cici's try or the song!
    لا يَشْكُرُ الله مَنْ لا يَشْكُرُ النَّاس
    The One Who Doesn't Thank Others, Doesn't Thank God
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Oriee View Post
    What did you love exactly??!!!
    Cici's try or the song!
    cici's try! But the song isn't bad either!

    @ cici: I suppose this is the first try from the many more to come!

    Quote Originally Posted by citlalli View Post
    I just have to keep in mind I need patience (which I don't have a lot of )
    As-sabr jameel!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by citlalli View Post
    LOL Oriee, I thought you had heard it and wrote it down Where did u find the lyrics? I searched and searched, and nothing!

    Thanks a lot for all the corrections and explanations Hehe, I made you guys work a lot Inshallah I'll improve as you said... I just have to keep in mind I need patience (which I don't have a lot of ) Thanks for all your time and effort too dear
    No, I'm sorry I didn't unfortunately ... I don't remember where exactly , but in somewhere on the web =D

    You're so welcome, if you stil have any doubt please don't hesitate to ask.
    and don't worry about troubling us, so why we're here ?!

    That's strange, "You don't have patience".. what you do and knowing more than one language!! I think you have patience more than me at least

    Again, You're welcomed any time dear =)
    لا يَشْكُرُ الله مَنْ لا يَشْكُرُ النَّاس
    The One Who Doesn't Thank Others, Doesn't Thank God
     
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    @ LoLo: Aha

    @ Cici: I liked your saying that "someone keeps pulling your leg"
    لا يَشْكُرُ الله مَنْ لا يَشْكُرُ النَّاس
    The One Who Doesn't Thank Others, Doesn't Thank God