Nasri Shams Eddein - La La Lah

لا لا له لا لا
قتالة عيون الهوى قتالة

طير يالي طاير صوب البيت العالي
خبرهم انو حبهم ع بالي
طير يالي طاير سلم ع الغوالي
وقلن أيام الهنا شيالة
***
جيت لدارك زور الورد وشمه
قالوا ويلك بعده الورد على امه
ورد خدودك حن وطايب لمه
وميالا زهور لكن ميالة
***
ريم الورد ترمي القلب عيونه
وسحر الليل مكحل ريف جفونه
شعرك تارك للنسمات جنونه
وعيونك تحكي عيون الغزالة

Hi,

Here is my attempt. I guess there are some mistakes. I even don't know if the song's name was translated correctly.Let's wait for a native speaker to correct the translation.

OBS : It's missing the first part of the song : The Mawwal . Do you have it ?

لا لا له لا لا
No no no
قتالة عيون الهوى قتالة
Love's eyes are mortal/Lovely eyes are killing me

طير يالي طاير صوب البيت العالي
Fly Oh bird towards that house on high
خبرهم انو حبهم ع بالي
And let them know that their love is on my mind
طير يالي طاير سلم ع الغوالي
Flay Oh bird and greet my dear friends
وقلن أيام الهنا شيالة
And tell them that the happy days are coming
***
جيت لدارك زور الورد وشمه
I came to your garden to see and smell the rose
قالوا ويلك بعده الورد على امه
But they told me : Poor you ! . It(the rose) is still in the rose bush
ورد خدودك حن وطايب لمه
your rose face is yearning and charming for its gathering (the rose bush)
وميالا زهور لكن ميالة
And the flowers are fond of it(your rose face)
***
ريم الورد ترمي القلب عيونه
The rose gazelle throws a deep look
وسحر الليل مكحل ريف جفونه
And the night was bewitched by the darkness of her eyelids
شعرك تارك للنسمات جنونه
Your hair flowing over the wind is madness
وعيونك تحكي عيون الغزالة
And your eyes talk like the eyes of the gazelle

That's it ! hope no many mistakes

Hi I've got the song :

http://www.4shared.com/file/12674346...n_El_Hawa.html

Could anyone copy the mawal and correct my translation ?

Thank you

anyone ?

قتالة عيون الهوى قتالة
Love's eyes are mortal/Lovely eyes are killing me
*correction* love's eyes are murderous

great trans. I didn't find any mistakes in it..

Originally Posted by sohuda

قتالة عيون الهوى قتالة
Love's eyes are mortal/Lovely eyes are killing me
*correction* love's eyes are murderous

great trans. I didn't find any mistakes in it..

Thank you Sohuda , definitively love's eyes are very dangerous.......lol. No mistakes ? unbelievable...................lol. A last favor , if possible.Could you copy for me the mawal ? I've tried but there are many words that I don't know. If no possible no problem at all.

Thanks again

Bye

LOL, yeah defo 'dangerous' is a better word than 'murderous' I translated literally..
I'll check out the song and get back at ya!

here's the mawal:
(I wrote it for you as I heard it, but not sure if it's right)

لا متلها في حدا ولا متلي دارا دار
هب النسيم الطري عزهورها و مال
يا حلوة مثل القمر ولفي لحماك و جار
تشتاقها العين بس القلب ما يطال

Thank you Sohuda. I'm going to try translating the mawal .